Reviews for Seduction Game
Rafja chapter 1 . 8/2
Well, I guess your english did improve, but there are still many mistakes. But you should definitly re-write Marry me , there are just to many mistakes, many silly mistakes, I guess you just need to read it again and again to find all of them, or at least many. But story-wise it's great, your grammer is the only bad thing, maybe you should search for a profreader?
Kandykornsheba chapter 1 . 6/28
Yaaay I love this story so much
Elixiria chapter 1 . 3/21
Can I just say you write one of the best sex scenes ever 3 I can vividly imagine Ren and Kyoko doing that. Kyoko might be a little OOC but everything else was excellent. Please do write some more :)
DokidokiMariel46 chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
YES. CKDKCKEKCSJ I LOVE IT.
claraowl chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Hmm... well-done! :D
NatsuxLucy4ever chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Oh my god... That was so... Hot /
j chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
good
zarate.jazmin chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
I think you made a pervert out of me. Hahaha. Loved the short story.
ivy2772 chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
That was a really good story...but you need to fix some of the grammar.
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
loved it!
Kageru-san chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
One of your best Skip Beat! love it!

Kyoko plays her roles exceptionally well that competes with the author's one.
SesshysMateSilverBubblez chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
I liked it, but some of your words are mixed.. juz continue to check that. :)
aangandnaruto chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
it was a good story but you need to prof read it. keep the same tense and make sure you type the right word. i had to reread some sentences. they were confusing. other than that it was good. keep up the good work
propertyofjensenackles chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Great story.
clarageo chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
WOW! Oh! my husband came back only at Wednesday...and now? you make me feel really hot!...I really like it! thank you.
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