Reviews for Blood Maid
I don't feel I'm strong enough chapter 24 . 12/25/2017
Kool u write more Christmas.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2017
Plz update soon
Kikyo chapter 24 . 1/24/2017
It's amazing please continue
llazo4108824 chapter 24 . 11/2/2016
This is a very cool fanfic that you made.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
I am liking the tone of the story and how you embrace Alucards likely rough social behavior. Few concerns though. Your dialogue is hard to follow i often dont understand whose speaking be cause you sometimes forget or completely mix up "he said or she said" often it will show up in the following sentence that is obviously not theirs. Im beginning to think English is not your first language. If so congrats for a dedicated effort. Id highly suggest you have someone go over your work your story is suffering from these easily rectified mistakes.
kirenuchiha1 chapter 24 . 5/14/2016
It's about to go down
Guest chapter 7 . 5/13/2016
You should consider a beta or someone to check your work before posting. Im trying to enjoy the story but the ridiculous spelling errors and words not used in proper context scream amateur. This has great potential but these fumbles add up and ruin the mood and characters and honestly make me cringe a bit when the flow breaks. Please go back over your work and repost.
Regards, Violet Jupiter
vampgirliegirl chapter 24 . 5/13/2016
Trek rep going
Jareth'sQueenBitch chapter 24 . 5/12/2016
This was such a rude cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next chapter. I can't wait to see him with vampire Seras. He'll most likely have a harder time controlling himself around her, won't he?
Jareth'sQueenBitch chapter 23 . 5/12/2016
This entire story is amazing! Oh my god. I was so enthralled I completely forgot to review the other chapters in my haste to read more. I'm really liking how passionate and all consuming Alucard's feelings are for her. This is just so great! I never want it to end. Ever.
marshmallowbear87 chapter 1 . 2/3/2016
update please
sakurahan chapter 23 . 8/26/2015
Noo Dx why did you leave with such a cliffy ;A; it was getting so good TT please tell me you will be updating the wonderful fanfiction soon. I am dieing to know what happens next. This story to awesome to drop xD.
natwing642 chapter 19 . 7/19/2015
Please continue. I need more good Aluseras! !
Sasha88 chapter 23 . 4/6/2015
i like this updater soon
Phreekista chapter 23 . 1/30/2015
Finally long waited cp!Im so happy that you didint stop writing
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