Reviews for Angels Among Us
Fullmetal11791 chapter 7 . 2/21
Why is Harry calling Lasciel "kiddo", when she's like , thousands of years old? Secondly, why are you having Murphy act like a jilted teenage girlfriend? It doesn't make any sense.
maxe03 chapter 13 . 12/2/2014
As far as I know McCoy didn't really teach Dresden he didn't really do anything a normal person wouldn't do for a 16yr old. From what I've seen he probably didn't teach him to make him easier to deal with
maxe03 chapter 12 . 12/2/2014
If he's going to work with him he might as well get paid
maxe03 chapter 4 . 12/1/2014
really what is he apologising for
maxe03 chapter 2 . 12/1/2014
this is something I always hated about the series but why must he tell Murphy or feel guilty it's not like she doesn't keep thing from him that are none of his business
maxe03 chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
This is a prime example of why Murphy annoys me also how did he going in a hospital without crying especially if while getting emotional
Snickerdoodle Once Removed chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
The rhythm of the words is all fucked up because you didn't use commas properly. It makes it hard to read. Grammar is extremely important for any writer; I, personally, will only rarely (if ever) start a story with grammatical errors in the summary, and most people I know feel the same. However, it's an interesting story idea, and the characters seem reasonably accurate. So, work on grammar, and don't be discouraged! Practice is key.
Tina-CMW chapter 15 . 8/5/2013
I really liked your story. It moved me to tears, laughter, and that tension you get in your belly, hanging on words... It wasn't a duplicate of Jim Butcher's tales, but I believe the compliment is that I enjoyed it very much anyway. Thank you for sharing
wizmage chapter 7 . 3/24/2013
I like it and hope you write another story.
Guest chapter 15 . 3/15/2013
well it was so nice and good , but Harry the selfsacrificing hero with martir complex was there but it was to much love and happyness then go to the imposible, put 3 womans in one house is madness specialy if they oll love the same men. and Harry the Harry who we know will never work for Marcony or the fallen. but I feel happy then in this universe Harry have a happy and sweet relationship after oll his sufering life he deseve some love.
Biblio388 chapter 15 . 11/21/2012
This fic is EPIC! I love the story and the characters. I will be looking at all of the fics by this author that I can.
krashkart chapter 2 . 7/12/2012
I'm reading this story for the third time now.
Fire From Above chapter 15 . 2/6/2012
Nice to see how Harry's friends helped him survive. But I am kind of wondering about him and Murphy since things seem sort of unsettled between them. Unless his invitation to her for the club was the official rejection.
Fire From Above chapter 14 . 2/5/2012
Harry didn't seem to do a whole lot of fighting.
Fire From Above chapter 13 . 2/5/2012
Awesome to see everyone working so diligently.
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