Reviews for Freedom Sliced Away
Girlygamer77 chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
I really like ur story I mean not because of what hapened to max u no csuse I feel bad for her but I like the story in general. I think u should continue I where the flock finds her or fang or something like that causr I would seriously continue to read
4231dog chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Oh my god that makes me so sad. What made you think of that?
Awesome Pie chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
You called this bad? This is pretty good! You should see those others on here there like, bad. But anyways, you should write a sequel thing-mibob.
Nicia chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
OMG! That was so sad, but I loved it at the same time. Poor Max :'(
FlyingBoppers chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Wait...you called this bad writing...AND you've read other stories on this site? No hun, this was amazing.
ParallelWonderland chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Wow... Great imagery actually, poor Max.

But I think you should continue this, it would make for an interesting two-shot, or even a story.

Good work!