Reviews for Hot Mess
Guest chapter 24 . 2/27/2016
Hot mess perfect title because it truly was a hot mess, nothing made sense the story was all over the place your characters were not likable at all. Honestly if the all died in a fire I wouldn't even care. Honestly it just seemed like you wanted to write about them fucking which wasn't even that good
twlightbella chapter 18 . 9/2/2015
They have sex on the roof
twlightbella chapter 14 . 9/2/2015
They had sex
twlightbella chapter 12 . 9/2/2015
twlightbella chapter 11 . 9/2/2015
They kissed
twlightbella chapter 6 . 9/2/2015
Oh no
twlightbella chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
Bella is back from Phoenix Arizona
Guest chapter 24 . 5/23/2015
Hahahahahha really you try to pass this shitty story off as a good one. You say you want to write a novel lol please don't here it's free but you want people to read your shit and pay for it no just no
twlightbella chapter 25 . 5/19/2015
Edward and Bella married with a daughter named Elizabeth Ann Mason Cullen and another baby on the way and Jacob and Leah married with a baby on the way
twlightbella chapter 24 . 5/19/2015
Edward and Bella make love in a office
sue1zide chapter 3 . 2/4/2015
I lost this but I'm so happy I found it again.
sue1zide chapter 2 . 1/28/2015
There has to be more to the loathing between them than that?
sue1zide chapter 1 . 1/28/2015
I think this is going to be an interesting ride.
Kickinl8tr chapter 25 . 9/21/2014
Thank you love this
Kickinl8tr chapter 22 . 9/21/2014
Fitting end for the dill weed. And thanks for doing the research. ;)
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