Reviews for Hot Mess
Guest chapter 24 . 5/23
Hahahahahha really you try to pass this shitty story off as a good one. You say you want to write a novel lol please don't here it's free but you want people to read your shit and pay for it no just no
twlightbella chapter 25 . 5/19
Edward and Bella married with a daughter named Elizabeth Ann Mason Cullen and another baby on the way and Jacob and Leah married with a baby on the way
twlightbella chapter 24 . 5/19
Edward and Bella make love in a office
sueIZide chapter 3 . 2/4
I lost this but I'm so happy I found it again.
sueIZide chapter 2 . 1/28
There has to be more to the loathing between them than that?
sueIZide chapter 1 . 1/28
I think this is going to be an interesting ride.
Kickinl8tr chapter 25 . 9/21/2014
Thank you love this
Kickinl8tr chapter 22 . 9/21/2014
Fitting end for the dill weed. And thanks for doing the research. ;)
Kickinl8tr chapter 20 . 9/21/2014
What a twisted little twit mike is. And now I love jake too.
Kickinl8tr chapter 15 . 9/21/2014
Omg. Love it. I'm not an every chapter reviewer in fact I hardly review unless it is knock your socks off and my apologies I'm not verbose. I'm not a writer but love the amazing stories that are available to me in the twilight fandom. Thank you so much for this story I'm loving it. Xx
sabrina611 chapter 25 . 8/31/2014
je viens de terminer votre fanfic et je tenais a vous remercier
j ai beaucoup aime votre histoire, votre facon d ecrire , le caractere des personnages de bella ou edward

merci beaucoup d avoir pris le temps d ecrire pour nous egalement

a bientot

( je precise que je suis une lectrice de france))
alice'sbella chapter 25 . 6/23/2014
I fuckin' love it!
EDDIEBOYLOVER chapter 3 . 6/19/2014
I aaccidentally threw my phone after reading that last lineā€¦ shit just got even realer 0.0
Great chapter 3
Amanda chapter 25 . 12/26/2013
Wow great story these two came along way. Thanks for sharing and yeah...sone hot lemons! !
Amanda chapter 14 . 12/26/2013
WOW!
614 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »