|Reviews for Hot Mess|
| Amanda chapter 25 . 12/26/2013
Wow great story these two came along way. Thanks for sharing and yeah...sone hot lemons! !
| Amanda chapter 14 . 12/26/2013
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/25/2013
Wow...most of the stories on FF are predictable for the most part...nope not this one! Loving it!
| Amanda chapter 7 . 12/25/2013
Great engaging story. Really not sure about this Edward...but I'm sure it's a means to the end. Dream lemon...hot..hot..hot!
| Sarah Amin chapter 3 . 12/5/2013
More reasons for jacob to hate Edward !
| Sarah Amin chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
The cullens are charming arent they , at least the younger cullens are !
| ttandme69 chapter 25 . 11/7/2013
Great story. Loved it. Thanks for the hard work. Lisa
| hobardi chapter 4 . 9/25/2013
..."so Edwardella can't go to the ball. His fairy godmother says no. " That right there was comic gold, in my opinion! Great chapter.
| hobardi chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
Oh, wow. Honestly I'm ashamed to admit that I wasn't originally planning to leave a review, but your author's note in the end of this chapter made it impossible to go on without typing one! Hilarious, AND insane. The best.
But really, I do like Hot Mess the story, too (although it hasn't yet been as out there as the A/N, but one can hope)! I really hope this Edward (and Alice and all other characters scowling angrily at Bella) get their comeuppance, but Jake was a huge moron at age 12, too, so him as well. Bella so far is likeable, and I do anticipate seeing more of 'tough Bella' of the summary. Oh, and I loved the out of the blue quote-off with Bella and Emmett in the first chapter, great dynamic!
| PleasureofLife chapter 25 . 8/22/2013
Oh my sweet potato casserole! This story. I'm speechless it's firey and passionate and funny as hell and I LOVED it! *sigh* not sure what to read now but if you post anything you better believe I'm going to be reading it!
Damn *waves self with hand*
Till next time xox
| Twi-Mom12292005 chapter 25 . 8/22/2013
Pretty good, this was rec'd on facebook when someone asked for a firefighterward. Pretty darn good doll.
| PleasureofLife chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
I am sooo looking forward to reading the rest of this story! It's the Princess Bride quotes which have sealed in it's fate as my favorite first chapter! :)
| debslmac chapter 25 . 8/6/2013
:) loved this story
| Guest chapter 25 . 5/27/2013
sweet! thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/20/2013
I believe in mothers intuition. When I was in 5th grade, my bus crashed and my mom started freaking out before she even heard sirens.