Reviews for Mirror Image
Ollie Oxycotyn chapter 9 . 4/29/2011
Ok, so I will admit, at the end of Chapter 8, I had my doubts... I was like "How is she going to end this in just one more chapter?" I was thinking it was going to be rushed, but let me say I WAS WRONG! You did a fantastic job on the ending, it worked perfectly! And then you added the Epilogue and it fit in just wondefully! And I was so excited when I saw the sequel go up! Can't wait to read more of Icy Blue! Oh, and another thing: You did a great job on how stong of a character Scout is, I love her! And usually with these stories, you're rooting for Billy Darley to win the heart of the lead lady, but, really, I was rooting for Chris the whole time, he was a great character as well!
Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 10 . 4/24/2011
Could you imagine how kick ass Scout and Jess would be together? Oh my, forget the Darleys - the girls would be running the street :D This was awesome girl, i never did want you to end this story and still don't! I love Scout and Chris together, i think she made the right choice and Mark...OMG he's so cute and with the way you left that...damn girl what a freaking cliff hanger! You have to write more! More damnnit! :P

As always you do an amazing job with your writing so all i say is stay AWESOME! :D xo
sunstar234 chapter 10 . 4/24/2011
absolutly amazing:)

it's billy's kid:}

so that mean you are to make a seuqle?
leeseelee chapter 10 . 4/23/2011
Ok you cannot write a chapter like that and not continue this story! GAH!... GAH! ... AHHH! GAH!

More ... hello! More! haha (sorry I am hyper)


Mrs.TylerLockwood chapter 9 . 4/8/2011
i loved the story so much! greast job hope to read more from you.
Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 9 . 4/3/2011
WOW...AMAZING! So glad i had like 4 chapters to read in a row! hehe best way for a story like this that leaves you hanging on every word. This was an awesome story girl - I'd love to see more Scout, Chris and Billy! I'm hooked on the romance, angst and drama that you did soooooo well.

So yes i loved this, all of your characters were brilliantly done and you really felt for each of them! I am so happy i found and read this story - i can't wait to read more! xox
Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 8 . 4/3/2011
So their both out? I'm kinda pleased he only took a punch! :D major crushing on Chris! LOL you detailed the anger and angst perfect for the scene...i sound like a broken record but the way you write the scenes really does flow well so the whole argument leading up to them being banished from the crew was amazingly powerful.

I enjoyed Billy and Bones entry into the house - very subtly showing what it's like between the two gangs! Short and sweet review but simply this is brilliant and i can't wait to read what's coming up next so heading to chapter 9 now! :D x
Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 7 . 4/3/2011
I'm actually freakin scared for Chris's safety! I want him to be safe! OMG what have you done to me? That smut scene...woowie! *Is it hot in here?* LOL cold shower me thinks, that was done perfectly...the way you did their emotions really paired nicely with their actions! They make an awesome couple i have to say and i love them together! :D

LOL I cracked up when Don walked in, any girl in that position would go nuts! it was so true! and outside Billy was watching! Oh my i'm on the edge of my seat, please keep him safe! LOL

Heading to the next chapter now! Loving this story! :D x
Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 6 . 4/3/2011
Okay so I love bad boy Billy but Chris...OMFG girl he's like amazing! I'm falling for a completely made up character :P The way he cares for her, watches out for her! This chapter had me gripped the whole way detailed their chemistry brilliantly and the way their argument flowed at the end of the chapter into the 'romantic' scene OMG pure perfection! LOVED IT!

Another thing I really like is how you do it from different POV's, a different but powerful way of expressing their emotions! I wonder what Billy will do? EXCITED, im heading for the next chapter now! This was awesome girl! x
leeseelee chapter 9 . 4/3/2011
I like this ending! I'm glad she went for Chris!

Good Job!
leeseelee chapter 8 . 4/3/2011
Whoa! Holy shit! BANISHED!

Voted off the Island!

leeseelee chapter 7 . 3/29/2011
"Now where the fuck am I supposed to sit?" BAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Uh oh, the truce is null. shits gonna hit the fan
leeseelee chapter 6 . 3/29/2011
Putting Chris's life at risk like that ... not cool scout

Uh oh. Chris loves her. This is going to complicate things!


Ah no,he knows the apt now.

This chapter was written much better than the last one, good job!

Keep em coming
Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 5 . 3/29/2011
Hey! So just found you write fics to! :) Read all 5 chapters in one day and had to review! Wow loving it, Scout is one AWESOME character...the female version of Billy! I'm liking her whole attitude and relationship with Chris...i wonder if she'll allow Billy to get under than skin of hers? She's certainly made an impression on him!

This is very interesting and i can't wait til you next update (which i hope is very soon!) :D
leeseelee chapter 5 . 3/28/2011
IMO,there is too much repetition in your combo chapters. just my opinion tho.
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