Reviews for The Never Ending Road
Father of Understanding chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
I like this already. :)
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Update immediately, please!
Guest chapter 34 . 7/12/2012
Why didn't you have Becky telling dave about her powers.
Dark Horse Writer chapter 34 . 3/12/2012
No, this sounds like a very interesting an awesome sequel! :) I'm ready!
emenemdj chapter 33 . 1/23/2012
I found this story only yesterday and have just finished it! Bravo! A wonderful reimagining! I am very much looking forward to a sequel. One request? Please don't make Dave revert to being naive and incapable of doing much without Balthazar and Veronica. Almost every fanfiction I have read that takes place following the movie has Dave turn back into an idiot/clutz/weakling etc. He has just defeated Morgana. Something no other sorcerer, including Balthazar and Veronica, could do. Give him that credit! Yes, he has a lot to learn, but you can't go back to being naive and lacking self confidence after that kind of accomplishment! And for goodness sake, don't let him turn into a egotistical jerk either! It's just not in him to be that. He's too kind of a person. After reading this story, I have faith you can write a wonderful sequel. Take it and run with it FantasyBard! :D
dsklghaweusdvf chapter 33 . 1/8/2012
The whole story was fantastic, a very creative reimagining of the movie. I'm excited to read the sequel!
GoForTehGig chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Really nice prologue. I have watched that movie way too many times and I could replay it through my mind while reading it. Nice replay and twist.
lindsey and marie enterprises chapter 33 . 1/7/2012
I've been following this story since I found it, but never had a chance to review. May I say excelled job! I felt that you kept everyone in character, and the thought of Veronica being with Balthazar physically instead of just in his thoughts is very nice.

Once again, I enjoyed it, an I will be looking foreward to the sequal!

Happy writing!

Dark Horse Writer chapter 33 . 1/7/2012
I liked your rendition of the movie, it added some nice new twists and turns and new characters. I look forward to the future :)
Dark Horse Writer chapter 32 . 1/7/2012
Ah, so we have a converging story with Drake and Michael...interesting :)
gabbygirl89 chapter 31 . 1/4/2012
Great chapter! I can't wait to see how this all ends!
Dark Horse Writer chapter 31 . 1/4/2012
I like the fact that you aren't ending it here because I want to see what can come next.
Dark Horse Writer chapter 30 . 1/2/2012
The glowing bracelet, now I wonder what the significance of that is...hmmm
Dark Horse Writer chapter 29 . 12/30/2011
Hey this is a good chapter, but watch the spelling typos like Stutlar it's supposed to be Stutler
gabbygirl89 chapter 28 . 12/27/2011
Great chapter! I can't wait for more!
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