Reviews for Broken
wtchcool chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
So, so outraged by them keeping him from a lawyer, let alone the torturing. Bastards.

Oh. It's Dementor 2.0. Quite devious. Where's a patronus when you need one? ...Ah, there's Zoe! :) That'll work.

And Jayne is being his usual charming self and River's invading people's privacy, so all's right with the world! :)

Excellent work.
Jocasta Silver chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
I like that River, who really understand what he went through is the one that comforts him, because when you get down to it, they are both people who were broken by the Alliance in their own ways, and are struggling to survive.
Expecting Rain chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
I really liked this! And the opening section was a fantastic way to start.
Lsquare chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Just came across this story. Very nice. I really enjoyed the Mal-River scenes. It was good to see River taking command of her abilities, and using her connection to Mal, to help him heal. Well done.
The Silverdark Knight chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
...this was a good read. Thanks for the story, m-r.

-TK
Dherea chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
I really like this! What a horrible experience for anyone...thankfully River has the ability to help him get through this!
RionaEire chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Interesting torture device, clever idea that, scary but clever. At least Mal, when reliving the memories still knows that they are memories. But that would still be a horrid experience. I was so sure that them rescuing him was just a dream, I kept waiting for him to wake up back in there. River is a very good friend, that was nice of her to help fix him.

Riona
casedeputy chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Wow! Sorry that's all I can say about this one, because it was so good and emotional.
morethanamuse chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
i loved this. you wrote with such emotion... it was a fantastic read.
Alison M. DOBELL chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
I loved this. River was the perfect one to give the mentally traumatised Captain the kind of help he needed and it would be so like Simon to worry about him having mental damage that he might not be able to heal. Typical of the gorram Alliance to get it wrong, arrest and torture the wrong man, and not apologise or try to put it right afterwards. You really have tapped into the inate connection between Mal and River and it plays out so well. Very glad they got him back!

Ali D :)

"You can't take the sky from me!"
BigT1587 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
That was pretty darn good. Just what I needed to start a morning. The story was interesting and believable. Everybody was in character and involved in the the ending was satisfactory and conclusive.I especially liked that when you dipped into past episodes, you kept to the facts without adding your own spin. Overall,I thought it was a very enjoyable read.
Duchess of Strumpetness chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
WOW! Dark and angsty just as I like them and I love how River quietly helps Mal recover. Sexual or not they are my favourite paring.
Marie King chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
What a amazingly well written story! Well done!
Raven2004 chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Since I've recently become re-addicted to anything Firefly, this was a very nice treat to discover! You have the characters down perfect! Nice story and nice interaction between Mal and River.

Thanks!
Bytemite chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Very well done, and something I could see happening - in fact something I've been wanting to explore in writing myself.
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