ooooh so exciting the plot threads are coming together! thank you for writing every time i revisit this its such a treat

love how Viri is Sephiroth's emotional support therapy bird

i laughed out loud at sephiroth cutting the queue to spar that was great

I hope to see the end posted one day.

I really really hope you will post more chapters.
Apart from great characterizazions of our known heroes and villains you have a great bunchs of OCs (who feel like much more than OCs), Clouds gang, the three girls, I really love your story and the characters.

Why is Reno so petty? I really love Reno usually...

Viri sitting on Sephiroths shoulder... *heart eyes*
If I could draw I would draw this..

Love the story! So sad that there's not another chapterPLEASE UPDATE SOON! I've gotta know how Nibelheim goes down.

Oh boy, things are reaching a head!
At least Cloud is actually trying to get help and not go at it alone.
The Turks just keep sniffing, don't they?
Wonder what sent Veld/Tseng to Nibelheim- was it the reactor or the mansion?
Sephiroth is that petty. It's something of a marvel.
Best of luck!

This was a brilliant story. I absolutely loved the development of Cloud and Sephiroth's relationship. Sephiroth training a chocobo to attack and to use materia? A fantastic idea.

Thanks for sharing this.

Awesome fic. Love the plot. But I have been waiting for the CS bit for like forever. Talk about slow burn. Lol But am loving it. Is this fic still even alive?

I really love this story. I checked to see if there were any updates and I was so happy to see 2! The plot is really gripping and I love the interactions between the Chocobo, Sephiroth, and Cloud. I’m really interested to see if Sephiroth becomes stable or not. I can’t wait! I hope more updates come soon!

And so the question is what spooked Sephiroth ?

Lol.

Think this is my first ever review of this story. I usually don’t post comments in FF but wanted to say I love this story and how you write everyone’s personalities and viewpoints so we see just how you imagine everyone. We get to see Reno through not just Cloud and Zack but his own as well as Tseng, Cissnei, and evening Rude (I have a soft spot for him ngl)! Zacks always been my fav FFVII character but Cloud in this tied for me.

I’ve never minded the long wait times between chapters because they are always worth it. Take your time and write when you want too. This is a tough year for everyone and I just hope you yourself are staying safe and healthy with your friends/family.

I dont think I have ever been so sad in my life as I was the moment I finished reading chapter 24. I beg of you, please don't leave us readers hanging, you must continue!