Reviews for Before It Swallows You Up
sfulton229 chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
Very enjoyable fic! Love how you have Buck and Vin's voices down; there was no problem figuring out which was which. Buck was so proud of his vocabulary and he really did explain just what he was feeling for Chris. Nice catch by Buck to figure out that he was enabling Chris' problem and leaving. Vin is a tad more poetic but still practical; if he's noticed how Buck and Chris watch each other, I'm sure some of the others have as well. Nice hint that Chris isn't as indifferent to Buck's flings as he says. Very hot sex scene; the image of Vin taking Buck and how much they both loved it was so thrilling. I'm glad that Vin is open to further encounters. Lovely Mag 7 fic! I really enjoyed the shifting narrator part and seeing the scene from the differne POVs. Thank you so much for sharing this and I hope you will write more Mag 7 fic very soon! Whew!
HellzCrusader chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
interesting. a good start into the M7 series it'll be interesting to find out what you do with the next story. :)