|Reviews for Bang! Bang!|
| Warrior Chickenz chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Ahhh good times. In some places when mentioning the officer's you only use Arthur. Is this because Mathiew is forgetable?
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
That was good. Too bad it was discontinued.
| Romamama chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
neh you kept reffering Canda as Arthur. MEANIE! jk jk jk I love it even though you used Arthur so much kufufufu I have a preposition. How bout I make an edited version of this with AMERICA XD pm me if you like pffffffft kukuku
| Crazy4animeCouples chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
why do you refer to both police officers as Arther? I'm so confused
| Midsummer Kiss chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
I loved your storyy~!:DD
| UrbanArtzGal chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
You have an interesting story here.
A couple of things I noticed, you have a some run-on sentences that need to be split up, it's spelt Arthur (big thing here), the part between Matthew and Gilbert is not really believable; police don't ask a driver to step out of the car first thing, and you seem to have switched to calling Matthew Canada near the end. As for the grammar, I suggest reading out loud what you wrote; if it sounds funny, awkward and unnatural, it probably needs some work.