Reviews for I'm Ready
Loki's Son chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
I liked it! The off scene transformation of Hawkgirl into Shayera Hol could've taken place in Fate's Tower or just as well taken place as described here. It was a heartwrenching piece. You captured her emotions and let us see into them.

Structurally there were a few flaws. When referring to the planet, earth is always Earth. It may have been been better to refer to the Justice League rather than the justice league. It is a proper name. Those were the major nitpicky details, which ain't bad. (grammar alert!)

You should definitely write another one. You have lots of potential and you've explored a really good idea. Shayera needs more representation!