Reviews for While I Kiss You
Syriel1 chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
WOW ! c'était trop sexy et limite ils été avec moi dans la chambre tellment c'est vivant ...
OCDdegrassi chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
So incredibly sexy. I've always wanted to read a story where Merlin was the experienced one, and Arthur wasn't, but I've never been able to find one! You just made my day. Awesome fic.
ScorBug92 chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
It would be great if you did something else (either a chapter or a different story all together) that had their first time.
odessa spirit chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Loved the story. One of the best written love scenes I've ever read. Your descriptions were so real and breathtaking. Very hot!
Grizzo chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Like your writing, will be reading
remioromen1344 chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
hawtness abound. D
Sharon T chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Very steammy ,I loved it.
Penelope Snape chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
So freakin hot!
lilithaofsherwood chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Storylover158 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Hot though seemed half completed
JuliaHearts chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
ahhhh this was SO good 3 so INCREDIBLY written, and so hot 3333 amazing
Syrus chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
That was really well done! It's pretty reasonable to think that Arthur might actually be a little inexperienced in the area of physical intimacy, since I'm sure as a prince, he must feel as though he has to be a little choosy about his bed partners, haha. And I thought Merlin reacted just the way he should have, letting Arthur know that he wouldn't be ridiculed for his inexperience and gently guiding him as they went along. It was incredibly sweet and really hot. Once again, great job! XDD
Beizanten chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
THis is extremely hoT! Love unexperience nervous arthur, normally Merlin is the virgin considering he touch a unicorn!
The Black Rose16 chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Arthur was very cute.
JackHidden chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Sh*t! That's... That's really hot. I love Arthur so much. And this story will only make it even harder to resist him.

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