Reviews for Frozen Maelstrom of the Wild
Effusive Quisling chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
You may need to go back and have Spellcheck as well as other spelling devices on. Such as LIER and Liar. Lier is incorrect and should be Liar, I've only used on mistake as an example for future reference. Comma's and other things are also missing, you have plenty of run on sentences around here... Does you program point those out?
Na chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
Not only friends... Brothers! What a world this is turning out to be.
fusioninferno chapter 4 . 6/25/2011
All i gotta say is WOW! Did not expect that! So does that make them half brothers? If so then who is their fathers?
flamenvy963 chapter 4 . 6/1/2011
Damn dude I am so confused. You really ought to stop switching from first to third person alot.
Umbra8191 chapter 4 . 6/1/2011
great chapter i can't wait for the next update.
lynch8man chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
well naruto uzumaki i can tell that i believe you because i am you from another dimension. and i have traveled to a land where people run around in spandex and motorcycle helmets to fight evil monster things. so you might wanna get used to it. (lol good story you are making)
hd chapter 3 . 5/2/2011
i cant even be botherd to read this because sasuke is in it. i mean its okay if you like him but authors who like them both always end up making sasuke beter.
ZeroLink21 chapter 3 . 5/1/2011
not bad not bad but i so want sasuke to die i really really hate him but otherwise your story is pretty good keep up the good work
Umbra8191 chapter 3 . 5/1/2011
great chapter i can't wait for the next update.
the shadow overlord279 chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
Will you be changing the POV between characters or is it this the only chapter that will be in Toshiro's POV?
Umbra8191 chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
great chapter i can't wait for the next update.
Umbra8191 chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
great chapter i can't wait for the next update.
chm01 chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
it's a good start but you need to do some grammar checks
9tailedokami16x chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
what the hell okay forget what i said just explain who naruto's parent is and fast
In The Mix chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
It's okay... to early for me to say if I like it or not but please do UPdate soon!
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