Reviews for Slumbering Swan Extended
blb1000 chapter 1 . 3/24/2016
Nice fairy tale!
allidel chapter 5 . 1/10/2015
I think you wrote that beautifully...I did cry during these chapters of Alice's story! So sad, and so sweet that she was rescued! Thank you!
kmfroggi chapter 7 . 5/7/2013
This was a wonderful story, sad and heartbreaking but still wonderful!
Blood Everlasting chapter 7 . 5/1/2013
Pffft, apparently both kids decided it was nap time so I went on to read more only to find that maybe I should have read the rest first. Lol. Apparently you already HAVE written original stories, one of which you are actively trying to publish. I just want to say, you have talent. Don't let time or the lack of a willing publisher take away from your dream or hopes. Some of the best authors take years to be accepted and it's usually after they start to make it on their own. If you keep at it, trust in yourself, and those of us wanting a good story, and you will not fail. In the meantime, do what you have to do and make yourself happy while you keep sending out your story and wait for someone to realize and appreciate your talent. Much love and admiration.

Blood
Blood Everlasting chapter 5 . 5/1/2013
I hope you're happy! You wrote this so beautifully you have me full on crying! Dang it! XD But yeah, this is so amazing, I couldn't wait until I finished the story to review. I LOVE this story. And as a parent, I understand the importance of protecting one's child from real life monsters. This speaks to my heart and that is one of the many MANY reasons I love that you expounded on Alice's story. I'm dying to hear/read more on Jasper. You have thoroughly peaked my interest and captured my attention and heart. I can't wait to check out more from you. Thank you for deigning to become an author for you have such talent, it would be a shame not to continue to share it with not only us fanfic readers, but if you were to change this around enough to make an original story out of this, you would probably have epic loads more fans. *Buzz and Woody Toy Story gesture meme* Fans. Fans everywhere. Lol
I'm off to snuggle my son down for his nap and play princess with my daughter, River. . Thanks for the inspiration. *hearts*

Blood
debslmac chapter 5 . 12/4/2012
:):) :)
debslmac chapter 4 . 12/4/2012
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debslmac chapter 3 . 12/4/2012
:) :)
debslmac chapter 2 . 12/4/2012
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debslmac chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
:)
MagathaFox chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
That was a very sweet story. I enjoyed it very much.
alc1002 chapter 6 . 11/25/2012
Good chapter
xxlostxangelxx chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
EEP! loved it perfectly happy ending...for evers and evers ;) love this thanks :D xx
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
omg your story should have more notes. this is incredible. i love it, from the start 'till the end. becoming alice is magnificent too! good work :) i hope i'll see more of your works soon
JustJJ chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
Lmhsfan,

You definitely have the talent to write the way you think because you had me crying. Great fairy tale...that beat the heck out of some of the classics.

JJ
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