Reviews for Breaking and Entering
CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 4/3
Awww, that is so sweet that he went back for her.
TheEverythingGirl chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
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Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
You know, I believe you should turn this into a full length story. It's quite lovely. And the start was so good. If I were you, I would stop after he leaves the first time. And then continue at a slower pace, instead of trying to rush the story into a one shot. Or if you're going for the one-shot, extend it a bit :) Put page breaks and each new section represents another time of him visiting Yui until they get married or something :))))
I really like this start!
defy.mrt chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
adorable, really! I would love if it was a long-fic! congrats! (:
XxX-Naxid-XxX chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
awww kawaii! you write so beautifully! please do write more!
Akita-Neru69 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
awesome story hope to may be see a otonashi/kanade fic in the future that would be cool.
Shelby XD chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Second chapter!
Avaron-Amaterasu chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Hey! Yet another amazingly good Yui x Hinata story!
I love the way you write, it's not cliche and not too much of all that sappy stuff! It's pure and honest, and I really love it! The way you write Hinata suits him perfectly, and I could just imagine your story as if it was an episode in the anime!
I would keep this as a one-shot for now, but I can't wait to read more of your stories!
Whitewolf2431 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Very cute! Please write more! Or I'll just keep thinking of it! XD
RisingXxLawliet chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Okay, that was super cute. Love it!
Clueless-Major chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
This is very sweet, but is this life after the battle front? ) i really enjoyed reading this. -
NCISMcAbbyISthebest chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Oh my goodness this is amazing. One small thing was that Yui was hit by a car and paralyzed-unless you meant to do that, since you also incorporated Otonashi into the story! - Anyway, I love this oneshot; Yui & Hinata were one of my favorite parts about Angel Beats. They're so cute together.
Jam chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
Was very nice, but there is a mistake I should point out, Yui was hit by a car and then paralysed from the neck down, not born paralysed.
xMORIARTYx chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Second Chapter. PLEASE.

I LOVE IT! I always wished they could get together in their next life...
That Girl Who Writes Stories chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
I'm loving it so far!

You should continue defintely!
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