Reviews for Throw Out the Script |
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No longer functional chapter 37 . 7/5/2015 This was absolutely stunning. I cannot express all of the emotions running through my head. All of the details and love that show through made this story truly special. You may be one of the best writers that I have ever encountered, and i cannot express my gratitude for stumbling upon your masterpiece. Always cherish yourself and respect your writing ability. You truly are a shining star!:) |
Zenith Relaxation chapter 12 . 6/21/2015 I loved this chapter! |
GreenHorn22 chapter 37 . 6/20/2015 This was a fabulous story I couldnt stop reading it. Your an excellent writer and i cant wait to read more of your stories. |
HgSpartan chapter 37 . 5/23/2015 Bravo. Is a sequel in the works? I'll be sure to check your page. |
novelreader chapter 37 . 5/21/2015 God I had a huge review... and now it's deleted by accident. All I can say is this fic moved me and you are a wonderful writer. Thank you so much for writing this! |
novelreader chapter 33 . 5/20/2015 For some reason Kilgarrah's death made me sad :( you did a great job in backstory, emphasizing Kilgarrah's grief and Merlin's anger. He made a mistake, an oversight. Merlin falling in love with Morgana, obviously he'd go dark after he death. You could also sense the dragon really doesn't think humans fondly, even if they are his friends. Or maybe he's a very selfish dragon more like. Other people's suffering doesn't matter in the face of his own pain. He was planning on taking advantage of Merlin's forgiving nature. Still it got me sad, because he's one of the last dragons, and he really did so needed a friend. I love and hate how you made it so tragic! There really is no good and bad, I feel for every character in this story thanks to your brilliant writing! They are all so three dimensional! Bravo! |
novelreader chapter 32 . 5/20/2015 The ending was weird... and I kinda still get weird out by Morgana referring to Merlin as "Oh my Merlin" It sounds so funny! Especially after I read a crossover fic between Harry Potter and Merlin and remembered people use his name as a swear, well it was explained in the fic, "Merlin's Beard!" is similar to "Oh my god!", "Oh my Merlin!" haha I have a weird sense of humor. Anyway moving on... |
novelreader chapter 30 . 5/20/2015 I kinda really didn't know what was happening in the end, but for some reason I found the Troll very funny in the end. All through the confrontation, I was like what the hell was it doing there. I bet it didn't like being ignored like that lol, this chapter was like a combination of several episodes all rolled in one! LOL! |
novelreader chapter 29 . 5/19/2015 Your 'Next Times' sound much more funnier then they actually are. Honestly I think the only funny chapter in the story was Merlin's stupid letter, 'flutterface', Dragoon The Great, and the made up drama of Lancelot and Arthur's battle for the fair Guinevere. You can tell it was very popular production considering how long the tale still survived. ;) Other then that your chapters are not at all as funny as you hinted. |
novelreader chapter 28 . 5/19/2015 I have to say, your explanation is sound, and my cannon is now Morgause, Uther's bastard daughter. It makes sense. And I love how human you made her, and how she isn't completely evil, it makes reading this tragic to me, because I know she's not going to well... I get the feeling it's not going to end well... and mergana may not last long either... really it depends on Merlin. Killing Uther is a risky thing, because there's Arthur to consider, and as good a man he is, there's still potential of him being like his father, and he might even avenge him too. He still thinks magic is evil for goodness sakes, this is going to be tricky. I love how this story flows. It's not one episode next to another, it's one big story! With the episodes consisting within. Going to continue reading now. |
novelreader chapter 27 . 5/19/2015 Okay I'm not sure I'm a fan of the going wayward with cannon even though they didn't offer much information either about who Morgause's real father is, but not sure if I like the implication that she too is a bastard daughter of Uther because the show never clarified and it doesn't seem even Morgause knew about it or Uther for that fact... then again she was sent away real fast to the Isle so Uther probably wasn't aware, and if she did knew she never told Morgana because when Morgana found out she probably thought it would be more delicious if she became queen and undo Uther's ways because that would affect him more since he had a close enough father-daughter relationship with Morgana, it would break him. You did a real good job emphasizing somewhat the heartbreaking tender side of Uther and Morgana's relationship, the only time I saw her being intentionally soft to Uther without thinking it was an act was after the assassination attempt by Tauren failed so you kinda sometimes forget that in a way Morgana loved Uther as well, seemed more like she hated him despite the fact that he tries.. |
novelreader chapter 26 . 5/19/2015 Ah! :( Wanted funny time to bad, but can't deny things about to be interesting, well more so then it already is. You are a great writer. You really manage to make your characters so human, by showing their flaws so well, and how they would realistically deal with a situation. A part of me thinks oh gwen would probably talk to Merlin and Morgana about what she heard but that would be unrealistic because she was raised to think all sorcerers and sorceresses were evil and it would be understandable that she would think her two best friends are just lies. I get the feeling this will start a rift between the group. Ah, what the hell am I saying! I should just keep reading! |
novelreader chapter 25 . 5/18/2015 I love this! All I'm going to say. |
novelreader chapter 18 . 5/17/2015 Um wait a minute! Morgana and Arthur are brother and sister... right? |
novelreader chapter 15 . 5/17/2015 Technically Morgana marrying Merlin is not legal, I mean in Uther's mind. It should be... The whole servants not marrying royals is a stupid law. As for them getting married soon, I know some people in my life who got married after a year or a few months of getting to know each other. Can't really testify if that was a good idea, but they seemed to love each other a lot. I guess with some people you just know, and personally I think love is supposed to be a whirlwind, and chaotic, where you didn't see it coming and didn't expect it and then all of a sudden you're in love! This I think is my favorite chapter! |