Honestly, I really love that you are keeping her darker nature, simply directing it in a different and more controlled direction, I think that’s brilliant.

Another really exciting chapter

I didn’t think he was dead, but that’s truly an evil cliffhanger lol

Man, whatever you were on, it was certainly trippy lol

You make a good point in the authors note lol, thanks for the great chapter

Another really great chapter, and I am rather looking forward to the dragon lord revelation

I admit, I think the humor is probably one of my favorite parts of the story lol

That ending was rather hilarious lol

That’s one hell of a cliffhanger and one hell of a mic drop moment lol

Another really enjoyable chapter, though I think the romance is going just a bit fast, but then again, that’s hardly my area of expertise lol

Another really great chapter, I especially liked the humor and the small show of how truly talented Merlin is.

Really interesting opening chapter, but so far enjoyable

Really love your characterizations and development here.

this ending is nasty

oh merlin, just give in and be with her! you want her and she wants you just give in and be together!