I loved this and I hope that you continue to write this wonderful story. Wish Merlin would have done this instead of letting Morgana deal with her magic all by herself and maybe she wouldn't have turned evil. Anyway, I love this story and think you should continue writing this. I would love to see Gaius' reaction . . .

haha cant wait to c gaius's reaction also i wonder wat arthur would think

Aw. It's BEAUTIFUL! I love how powerful this is for the both of them, how they're crying with emotion. It's just so brilliant. I think that although this is a very good fic with just the one chapter, you should consider extending it - Gaius' reaction, and perhaps Merlin trying to teach Morgana magic?

A really awesome chapter, well done!

O! burn! Exposed! Lol, Gaius will be like O.O...sigh... merlin, what the hell is this?！！

To be honest, I wouldn't care if you continue this in a way that makes me want to throw my slippers at you. Why, you may ask?

You have the single best writing style I've seen in a fanfic in a long, long time. The characters are believable and it all just *flows.* It's a joy to read a well-written work, and the fact that the story seems intriguing is an added bonus.

This is really really good, try to add some more detail than just dialogue when it comes to Merlin, Morgana and the rest of the characters, describing their actions in detail really brings the story to life...

PLEASE UPDATE! This is really good and has great potential!

i love u! that episode made me all blah :P but u made it awesome! 3

sounds like a promising start :)

aww! if only he had said and done all this, Morgana definately wouldn't have been alone. great view on this! well done, this is a great story - keep on going, you've got great writing skills.

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So very beautiful, very funny and warm. This is really brilliant and romantic. I wish merlin would do the fire butterflu trick in the show, really beautiful! I would marry him for that!