|Reviews for I Walk Alone|
| tenaja chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
That was the single most depressing,heart wrenching,sob story i have ever encountered...i actually almost teared up a bit.i thought he was gonna kill the .but its has mel 's okay.
| Juggerknot16 chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
I have to say, this really beats your other fic.
It had so much more detail, and you could actually feel that he was a lonely,lonely guy.
Another thing I loved about it (though I shouldn't) was that it was so much like Hunger Games. Even from the beginning I felt your story gave off a Collins vibe, but when I read "It was just another mouth to feed," I was totally sure.
AND it reminded me of Gale. Anything that reminds me of my favorite character in the whole universe makes its way to my favorite, which is always a plus.
This is how I imagine how Gale got by when Katniss wasn't around.
But, yes, back to the point - Jared is badass. I think this is exactly how SM would have written Jared's pov. Or at least this is how I imagine him to act like.
Great job! You've managed to impress me further!
Although, as much as I love the song, and the lyrics, it does not go with the whole environment.
But, I liked the story. A lot.
Good job. Hope you publish some more! I cannot wait!