Reviews for Who's The Child Here Redux
TheWiseGamer chapter 11 . 12/18/2013
i like it pretty cool fic
goldengod 180 chapter 11 . 5/11/2013
Great end
avengers-assemble-x chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
I loved it! One of my fave stories ever! Is this the end?
Ami Quinton26 chapter 11 . 6/24/2011
Wow really great! I thoroughly enjoyed this (and I thoroughly enjoyed Dot giving Graham the boot) and I wonder if you have more because this seemed like an ending to me :) But anyway, you're a great writer and I hope to see more of some Animaniacs fanfics from you!
Gemini's Dragon chapter 11 . 6/16/2011
Wow, that story was great! I just couldn't stop reading! I wonder if there's any more to it? :)
Ami Quinton26 chapter 8 . 5/31/2011
I just KNOW that Tellulah is pregnant, and for some reason I'm hoping it's like twins or something. XD

Bwa aha, I know I'm evil

I'm still thoroughly enjoying this story! Your writing is very good and the plot quite interesting. I'm HATING Max though, what a little snot.

And Graham? He's making my hairs bristle because I get real annoyed thinking of ANYONE treating Dot like that. She deserves much better and I hope she does end up finding someone else...
FunGuy155 chapter 6 . 5/19/2011
The story is pretty good. Its build up makes you wanna see what would happen if they saw each other again so my reaction when they saw each other again: Finally! But, not only that, the story keeps making you wanna get back to it, keep reading till a satisfying end to the story. It kept me curious about what would happen and left me excited for the next chapter. All in all, great story, great characters, great build up, hope that the pay off is great as well.
Isabella387 chapter 5 . 5/8/2011
So you really need to update this. Like really really soon. I love this story so much and I NEED to know what happens. Your characters are very colorful and your plot is very realistic. Amazing job so far. NowUPDATE!
Ami Quinton26 chapter 5 . 5/6/2011
This is a great story with great writing and plot. I like your OC characters because they're interesting without being cliche or done a million times. I'm really into the story so I hope you will finish :) Looking forward to more!
SideshowJazz1 chapter 5 . 5/5/2011
I love this story! Update soon!
BrightShiningAsTheSun chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
Hi! I really love this story! P It's sad 'n' mushy to say but it's kinda brightened up my day! And to quote Dot: "It makes me feel all warm and squishy inside... Either that or I've sat in something..." xxx I also love Wakko's daughter cos she reminds her or me... xxx
Mimi0204 chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Oh yay! I loved this story the first time around, so I'm happy to see it redone. Can't wait to read more!
smileysarah94 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Hello, new reader here. I’m definitely intrigued by the plot since you packed in quite a bit for the first chapter and I’m impressed by your motivation to continue from where you left off as well as your superb sense of grammar. Props for that. :)

I like the idea of Dot seeking independence from her former child star image and how her brothers support her decision even it’s particularly hard for Yakko to deal with. You’ve definitely captured the sibling love between them including Yakko’s overprotective nature. :)

Introducing Babs was a great idea and I’m guessing she and possibly other characters from Tiny Toons are going to play bigger roles in this story so I’m definitely looking forward to that. :)

If I may offer some constructive criticism, I personally found that some conversations seemed a little bit repetitive for the first chapter. Other people may disagree and that’s fine by me but overall, it didn’t distract from the plot and you made up for it with the jokes you threw in. I actually laughed out loud so that was a nice touch.

I was quite surprised by Yakko’s reaction after his argument with Dot and I never expected him to make a drunken advance on Wakko’s girlfriend. I found that to be very interesting since we know Yakko has a big thing for girls (and that’s a polite way of putting it) but I’m willing to roll with the fact that his judgement was clouded since he is usually the responsible one.

All in all, I thought you did very well and you’ve certainly grabbed my attention. I look forward to see how this story plays out but once again, well done. :)