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| ChordOverstreetFan chapter 8 . 11/26
I like this better than what actually happened in the episode. Jesse's version of Bohemian Rhapsody was amazing but the idea of Jesse returning to ND at the last minute to win Rachel the trophy is just too cute.
| katraj0908 chapter 42 . 6/28
I liked your story, but it was sometimes difficult to get through with the lyrics as I had to constantly look up the songs. I mean sure I could have just read the lyrics, but I wanted to hear how it sounded in context as well. It just seemed that every chapter had lyrics and while that's great and everything maybe a bit too much.
| JaToya chapter 37 . 3/14
This is probably one of the top three I'd have liked to see as a longer multi chapter.
| JaToya chapter 27 . 3/14
Quite possibly my favorite chapter so far.
| Elizabeth Annette chapter 42 . 9/12/2016
I just finished reading 42 chapters! I love this! Are you going to continue?
| bluetigresss chapter 19 . 4/10/2016
This is so beautiful- gave me THE FEELS
| bluetigresss chapter 17 . 4/10/2016
This is so CUTE. Captures Finn and I love the St Berry.
| bluetigresss chapter 16 . 4/10/2016
When is St. Berry week? Do tell. I can't find it anywhere and it's one of my greatest OTPs.
| heilman4316 chapter 42 . 3/17/2016
OMG! I gotta say, this is the first time to ever leave a review. And I have been reading fanfiction for a couple of years. Just wanted to say that I love all of your shorts and the different versions of Glee episodes. Awesome! Loved it. Please keep going.
| 123glee123 chapter 42 . 1/8/2016
wonderful 3 Thank you for the shout out, even though i didn't need it, i was saying what i needed to say and that's all :) i really hope everything is good with your husband and your children.
P.S. I still admire you :) Keep doing what you love, also if you are going to upload soon (please do ASAP) especially with puck/noah, just know that he was recently arrested for child pornography. Please keep that in time for when you upload. :)
| Audrey chapter 36 . 12/25/2015
I'm going to be completely honest, after reading this, I feel like YOU should've written for the show, I wouldn't cry after every episode Jesse is in. Cause after every episode, THEY MAKE JESSE LOOK LIKE A TOTAL DICK. If I had watched Glee earlier, I would've PAID them to include more episodes
| northstar61 chapter 40 . 10/15/2015
Finally, Schue takes Rachel's side in something - even if it's because he likes the song rather than because he's sold on her being granted a solo. Still, it helped our merry little band of conspirators set their plan in motion, and that's all they needed. I appreciated the way Santana kept holding Finn at bay (that stiletto must've hurt!) and the way so many of the ND crowd rallied to Rachel's side. Both songs were beautiful expressions of Jesse and Rachel's mutual love, and I would've paid good money to see them sing to each other like this.
Yet another spot-on fix. :)
| northstar61 chapter 39 . 10/15/2015
You clearly understood how frustrating it was in the original episode for Rachel to be singing a song relating to Finn (and picturing him in her mind, too), while Jesse, wearing his heart on his sleeve, did everything in his power to make amends for his mistakes. She *should* have stayed with the guy who made her smile and laugh the way no one else ever had, but RIB had other ideas. Sigh.
Unlike Jesse, Finn didn't accept her for who she was, but was always trying to change her. "Fit herself into the Cheerio-shaped hole that Finn had shoved her in" is the perfect metaphor for what was wrong with their relationship. As for Will, given how inappropriate his behaviour has been on more than one occasion, he's really in no position to judge the ethics of a Jesse/Rachel pairing.
Thanks for the fix!
| northstar61 chapter 38 . 10/15/2015
Yep, both of your song choices are perfect for them. Then again, so many songs just scream St. Berry. If only we could've had more over the course of six seasons...
Rewriting an episode like Funk will never grow old, and I completely agree that RIB had to do something to make Jesse the 'wrong' choice for the audience. Of course, it never worked for those of us who saw past this one action and understood that these two were soulmates. Loved both of them being so caught up in their own little world that they're oblivious to what's going on around them, including the extent of their audience. I also like the idea of VA being impressed enough by Rachel's singing that they joined in on the chorus. And Shelby kicking Giselle off the team was karma, pure and simple.
A lovely addition to this series. :)
| MissRe chapter 42 . 8/22/2015
This was a fun one. I love the idea of them being best friends that got separated by distance and time. It really makes you wonder how things would have been different if they had been in touch. The lyrics are fun - nice way to combine Spring Awakening and Glee. I know your life has to be crazy so I definitely appreciate these updates when the muse strikes. Excellent as always!