|Reviews for College Break|
| Chesna chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Yes, I liked that. I find it hard to speak like Melinda and most of the fan fiction of "speak" I think sucks because they create a Melinda character who speaks freely and openly right after the book ends. I cannot imagine that sort of transfermation overnight for her. Selective mutism is a complex mental health disorder and the chances of a on voice switch being flipped is slim.
Since your story takes place so far after the end of the book it does allow for a lot more change in Melinda. I liked the character conny, the only thing I would change is how bluntly stated it is that conny is raped by her brother without Melinda stepping in. It would be more powerful if Melinda only had suspicion of IT or if she gave up her flight to help conny.
I relly like your premise of mini melinda. This is by far the best fan fic I've read on speak and I think you have a talent for writing. Don't give up if you like to write. Nice job
| Mary chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
| Victims chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
Please write more! I'm hooked!
| Coudneverdreamtobebetter chapter 4 . 1/26/2013
| KShade chapter 4 . 12/7/2012
Please update this! I think you're definately in character for an older version of Melinda
| Laveycee chapter 4 . 9/8/2012
Seeing as it's been-4 years?-in your story since she was raped, she'll be OOC. But I personally loathe Donnie. Conny...I feel sorry for her. And Melinda is actually pretty in character.
| Joanjett77 chapter 4 . 7/13/2012
I love that you brought David back! :) something should happen between them... Like a good thing, not a bad thing. I love how Donnie was in her class, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
| Pinkie chapter 4 . 6/1/2012
Looking forward to more:) this is awesome! I love how you brought David back3
| GeorgeBoo chapter 4 . 5/25/2012
This is really good, Even through it has been forever since I've read "Speak", I was remembering so much with this, it really ties it all in together. I want to know what happens between Melinda and Daniel! And what changed mr. Evans?- how will they act between each other...? -
| shadow chapter 3 . 3/11/2012
More more more ive been sucked in please uppdate fast i love this
| Marie King chapter 3 . 3/8/2012
omigosh please update when you can this story is really getting interesting!
| totally loko x10 chapter 3 . 1/13/2012
I really like this story and desperately want to know what happens to Conny. Please update soon.
| mon-petit-pois chapter 3 . 12/18/2011
Love it sofar! Please update soon! I hope Donnie burns in hell
| kitty tokyo uzumaki chapter 2 . 10/15/2011
Please keep going! I really wanna know what happens next!
| Lacie chapter 2 . 9/28/2011
Keep Going, this is great!