Reviews for The Sea Like the Stars |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! This is a great and funny story and I look forward to the next chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL... Okay- only YOU could have a chapter that was actiony AND hysterical at the same time. I also have to say I'm impressed with how you do Alan... Most people kinda have him as this soft, sweet, somewhat helpless character. And while he's got a sharp learning curve (cause he didn't know ANY of this was going one) I always figured he's be a strong personality type. And with that said. "And which part of hiding concussed psychotic costumed people who know kung-fu in the middle of my family and Homeowner's Assiciation controlled neighborhood counds like a good idea to you?" New favourite and most awesome line ever read and writen on this site! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Okay, that was just funny, poor Sam, I feel sorry for him...lol Keep up the great work and post more when you can. Cassy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, great chapter! There was a lot to love here; I lol'd at "more father figures than he knew what to do with", Sam's chagrin at the prospective invasion of his "perfect bachelor's pad", and Quorra's assessment of Alan-one. Oh, yes – *and* the way Quorra takes down Clu in the end. Bahahah. You do make me feel very sorry for Tron, though. I mean, his whole canon story is already pretty sad, but the way he's described here just makes me wanna hug him. Basically this chapter is awesome and I feel fully justified in adding this story to faves, because I hadn't yet. |
![]() ![]() Yay! An update! Short as it was but an update non the less. Update soon plz!:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an oddly humorous change from the established norm, though not unwelcome. If I didn't have the Repo! soundtrack stuck in my head turning everything creepy, this would indeed have made me giddy with glee. A sudden image struck me of this chapter, when everyone is getting buckled in, of Sam getting a bit lost in thought and muttering "now what?", at which everyone (including Tron but not the unconcious Clu) tenses up substantially. A tension-filled moment, and then cut to black. And it struck me - that's the way the movie SHOULD have ended, and whatever you have left to write would be a sequel picking up directly where this left off. It would have been epic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Sam, your life. Your LIFE. What is your life. This has the makings of a VERY dysfunctional family, XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, this story is so awesome! Its helping fuel my current Tron obsession, especially with Tron/Rinzler being injured. I just want to hug him! Please update, I can't wait to read what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() XDDDDD... "Sam, I do not understand. Why would there be such an obvious weakness-" ALL of Quorra's lines. Oh gods. You captured her perfectly- both the naive confusion about the user world and the blunt suspicion/hatred of Tronzler/Clu. I am so insanely overjoyed with your depiction of her-and she's crazy hard to write. My one point of confusion is why she didn't stab Clu when she had the chance. A sword strike has more reach than a kick, and given all Clu's done to her people and her world, I wouldn't think she'd be above killing him even when he's already down. You referred to Tronzler as having brown eyes again. I'm curious-is that intentional? Alan/Tron's eyes are blue-grey, so unless Clu did something... *shrug* Sam's perspective was excellently written. The little things added a lot-his acknowledgment that "distraction" was generally the most use he could be when Quorra was fighting, his side thought about how weird it was to call someone 'Dad'. Tronzler's lack of circuit-colors interests me... :) Eager to find out more. I like how his silence creeps Sam out- it is a Rinzlery trait. Come to think of it, what did happen to his rumbling noise? Last we heard was when it stuttered after Clu hit him. If it was just a function of breathing in the helmet, that might make sense-the helmet broke pretty quickly, and there was a good period when he had the helmet, but wasn't doing so well with the breathing (in retrospect, Clu being able to kick his ass makes much more sense). Still, can't help wondering. Oh, and Alan's still freaked out by him. :D Awesome. :) Rant concluded. This whole chapter was great, and your writing style is severely awesome. Can't wait to see how things develop. |
![]() ![]() I have to say, I think this might actually be your best chapter yet. All of the characters' voices and reactions were spot on. You had some really lovely little one liners as well. Sam placing himself, "the safe and prescribed distance of six feet from a fire," just seems so much like something he would be thinking. However, I believe that it was the last bit that really made it for me: "Clu started to slide sideways, his head eventually lodging itself at an awkward angle between Kevin's headrest and the man's arm; mouth hanging half-open and nose mashed to one side. Unconscious and not actively terrorizing, he looked disturbingly like a stoned 1980's Kevin. "Thank god I don't have any neighbors," Sam groaned before kicking up his stand and turning onto the road." I love comedic cuts :-) I look forward to your next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woot! So glad to see a new chapter. Why do I get the feeling everything's going to be more chaos, panic, and disorder once they get to Sam's "apartment"? And Tron! What's going on with him? *eagerly awaits more* |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...meep. (o.o) I want to cry, and hug Tron, and cry some more. Past that, this continues to be magnificent and I'm eager to see where you take it. oooh I hope it's long, I love long stories. xD And as much as I'd like to know what happens next, I think it's brilliant the way you've been flipping between POVs. You're very good at getting into the characters heads, I think. It makes reading a much more intense experience, to see it from all the angles. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, this is SO. COOL. This is pretty much exactly the sort of thing I was wanting Tron to do throughout the whole movie (rather than the last minute change of heart/sequel hook we actually got). Putting this on alerts; I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The POV are fine for me as you only write them when they add information/character development and not in a systematically. Alan's thoughts make sense and I won't mind reading some more Tron's angst . And I think I like your logic in characterization. I'll wait for the fourth part! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been following this fic from a distance but this update. Jeebus lord. I can't. Oh god. Oh my god. Cannot function. System error. Awaiting the next update, :3 |