Reviews for The Sea Like the Stars |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know what tosay... It was interesting enough for me to read it all. An not even only because of alan (Which is rare). X/ What else? The writing is decent, the descriptions are understandable, and enough for me to imagine it all. The chaps endings are decent cliffs, especila . But most of all, I'm very happy you updated! *goes reanding right away* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... This is just... COOL It'll be interesting to see what Clu gets up to in the real world (provided Quorra doesn't just derezz him first) And I'm liking how your writing Tron... It just seems really natural that he'd just be flat out wigged at the moment. Write fast please, I'm enjoying too much to have to wait long :D (yeah, I'm also demanding.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, you had me at your summary. I'll admit, I am a sucker for really good summaries. Most of the time, the summaries don't live up to the expectation of a good story - yours is one of the few exceptions. I cackled out loud when Alan charged down stairs only to find the scene going on in Flynn's office. I'll be watching this story with great expectations! Great job, especially on the characterizations so far! -Shadow Chaser |
![]() ![]() I really like what you are doing with the points of view. We get a continuous story line filtered through multiple perceptions. I especially liked it when you doubled back slightly in this chapter, so that we got Alan's perception of that "surprise" moment at the bottom of the stairs when he and Flynn see one another. I wonder if you will do the same thing in the next chapter, filling in the blank spots in their conversation that Tron missed? Again the only complaint I have is that the chapters are too short. Ah well, good things come in small packages :-) I look forward to your next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! This is really getting good. I love Alan's POV at the beginning, seeing the Programs made human, and I love your take on how everything would translate into the User world. Tron at the end is breaking my heart, too, poor guy. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! That was good! I can't wait to see more, so please keep up the great work and post more soon. Cassy |
![]() ![]() ![]() ! You updated! :D Much, much joy. Alan... Oh gods, "Sam, go!" ... -_- So fracking perfect. And his vast, vast confusion-first crazy people in black bodysuits, then evil-crazy-young-[i]Flynn[/i] in said suit. Going down just to get Sam away from it all. And then Flynn. :) Go, Quorra! And Tron's PoV. Fracking excellent. I was wondering if you were avoiding program perspectives, and am glad to see otherwise. Gaah... poor Tron. Adjusting to different senses, still waking up from being Rinzler, and then with injury and Alan/Flynn being there and... *shakes head* You captured his panic and confusion and shame so well it hurt. The helmet. Clu's prison, shutting him away from the world-but also something to hide behind, because he doesn't want anyone to see him. And of course it wouldn't come off easily; even apart from the grid - user world transition... it's not meant to. What he caught of the Alan-Flynn conversation was great as well; Alan seems to be getting the weirdest recap ever, and is understandably unhappy at having all this shit thrown at him like this. I'm hardly coherent at this time of night/morning, but I believe what I'm trying to say is "You're awesome. Please keep going." |
![]() ![]() Nicely written, very interesting scenario here and excited to see what is next! Love the description of the chaos and the odd situation of having both Clu & Rinzler in the world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this is a nice start! I so wanted Tron to come and intervene at the end, and this chaos is amazing. Good job! Can't wait to see where you go with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you don't continue this, I will die. Then I will transport myself into the Grid from the afterlife, find your computer in the global system, and from it, find you. Then I will haunt you forever. So continue it. Please. This is AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() Dude! You can't stop there! update update!..plz |
![]() ![]() As much as I would like to give you some constructive feed-back, all I've got to say at the moment is that the chapters are too short :-). I look forward to your next up-date! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLease don't kill Tron. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This may not be the story but can we make it so? I prefer Flynn getting back. Well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok, this is reeeeeally really good. i love your descriptions and even the way you portrayed the characters in this short chapter. i am very intrigued to see where this goes. keep it up! |