Reviews for Spar
Ponytales chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
This story was cute, and I could totally see them knocking the crap out of each other sparring just for fun. I liked it.
whatkindofnameisvolta chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
please do continue... it would be nice for them to err realise their "feelings" for each other and have Connor and Abby tease them about what happened with jess and the tour
Dinos-withpointyteethandwings chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
hahaha lol awkward much :)i really like this lil fick, its so cute and funny, would you think about doing a sequel or continuing this one ? i'd really like it if you did it would be so cool:D
Duchess of Strumpetness chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
I've never seen Primeval but if it involves scenes anything like this I just might track it down. I love good slash and that was great - awkward much LOL
will-dont-read-my-fics-pls-thx chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Hehhee, I love awkward slash, that was really cute :D
PrehistoricCat chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
I'm not a slash fan, but I think this pairing is one I could actually believe in if its done right ... and I love this *g*
bornunderabadsign chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
"Did the punch bag do something wrong?" - *Giggling*

“The two men circled one another, each carefully watching for signs of attack whilst looking for the opportunity to do so themselves.” – Sexy part.

"You couldn't kick a football."

"If it's shaped like y'arse Becker…yeah I could!" – Cute insults.

"Do you submit?" Becker hissed, using his legs to keep Matt still. – Yes please and thank you.

I loved the ending Jess giving a tour, not that is one majorly awkward situation. I bet no less funny to see and…*cough * maybe a little sexy . I love the story, good writing. ;)