Reviews for Photoplay
MissYesPleaseSir chapter 7 . 6/19/2013
Holy hotness, batman — this is an AMAZING scorching-hot story. I don't even *read* slash (some poly, but not slash, really) and this still had me pinned to the laptop until I read the whole thing through without stopping. *fans self* Thank you!
samekraemer chapter 7 . 5/23/2013
If you were here, you'd see me breathing a little hard, but clapping like a fangirl. Thank you for sharing. SK
samekraemer chapter 6 . 5/23/2013
my oh my
samekraemer chapter 5 . 5/23/2013
Where's the waiting list to get on for that experience? I've got my pen out...
samekraemer chapter 3 . 5/23/2013
Now THAT's a chapter!
samekraemer chapter 2 . 5/23/2013
I think I'd have imploded if I was Bella.
samekraemer chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Love this so far! Glad I found it!
CentauRita chapter 7 . 5/18/2013
Definitely not able to walk...just slithering away...leaving a snail-trail...a WetOne towellette would be helpful after reading that chappie ;P
CentauRita chapter 6 . 5/18/2013
All-Meat...no veggies!
CentauRita chapter 5 . 5/18/2013
Who was photoplaying whom?**giggles**
CentauRita chapter 4 . 5/18/2013
That last paragraph,with the remark about...

'...I was just an animal, a primal being that needed to be fucked.'

It made me think of, like opening...Pandora's Box ;P
CentauRita chapter 3 . 5/18/2013
And, it ain't Poly who wants to do it all day!
CentauRita chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
Nice shot, Edward...seems Jasper was pretty handy! ;}
CentauRita chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
If Edward could read Bella's mind...maybe it won't take long for Edward to get a mouthful of Jasper's cock.
Justname chapter 6 . 3/16/2013
That Curry person who reviewed is a complete jerk! Ignore her/him/it! He story was great.
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