Reviews for Photoplay
LyRiCho chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Oooooo.. What a great way to start a fic! Love it! XD I'll keep following along.. But I was kinda confused at first as to whose point of view was it.. But I think that's me just being a dope xD
simba5waldo5 chapter 3 . 5/10/2012
Lucky bellla! So it was a set up? The boys have actually met earlier? And they both want Bella? Damn! Freaking fantastic story. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 7 . 5/10/2012
That was fantastic. I am totally buying ur book tonight and now I am on to the alternate ending to this story. This was hot, but I am more I into j/e. This was fabulous. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 7 . 5/10/2012
That was fantastic. I am totally buying ur book tonight and now I am on to the alternate ending to this story. This was hot, but I am more I into j/e. This was fabulous. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 6 . 5/10/2012
Damn quantity. If I would have known how hot this is, I would have read a ling time ago. I so want to be a Bella. But I would chicken out. Love these 2 boys together, damn this is hot. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 4 . 5/10/2012
jesus, this is hot. i tried to find singlestrand story hard and couldn't. did she take it down? Fabulous story. love edward and jasper taking charge, then after bella overcomes her shock, she re-established her bossy behavior. this story is totally hot. Love it. I am glad there is an alternate ending and the story of E I have to read. Great job; Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 3 . 5/10/2012
Lucky bellla! So it was a set up? The boys have actually met earlier? And they both want Bella? Damn! Freaking fantastic story. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
wholly shit that was hot! Love how jasper can make edward that comfortable and him cuming in front of bella. I wish I had her job. Boy, Edward really does like jasper. Fantastic job. Love it. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
oh my god! I have had this story favorited for some time and for some reason I have not read it. It is fantastic! You are such an incredible writer. I love that edward has a huge crush on jasper and bella set them up together to pose, and edward had no idea. Love jaspers cockiness and he is all into edward. great job. melissa
aStubbornRose chapter 5 . 3/18/2012
Great story! Looking forward to seeing the alt ending.
Maxylicious chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
You are the first writer to make me completely relate to a Bella xter in an E/J slash fic, lol. I love and totally get her! what sane woman wouldnt be drooling over yummy naked guys in front of her *sigh*. Cant wait to read the rest of this :)
BaerAndSheep chapter 7 . 1/11/2012
Wow! That was super-hot!
BaerAndSheep chapter 6 . 1/11/2012
Now, thats mean, just stopping when the best is yet to come. I want more!
BaerAndSheep chapter 5 . 1/11/2012
So, I guess, that was nothing good Mrs Meyer had in mind for her characters. Well written! Thanks for sharing.
BaerAndSheep chapter 4 . 1/11/2012
Not what I expected, not at all! Im not a big fan of mixed threesomes, but I have to admit, so far this was quite hot!
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