|Reviews for A Shadow's Sin, War Against a Forgotten God|
| Ivanwright chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
I like were this is going.
| Poison Tree chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Okay. Upfront, I had a problem with the gun. Other than that it's all good and I look forward to the next chapter. Problem with the gun being: What pistol made in the last 200 years only fires ONE shot at a time? I just, I mean I'm not an expert on guns or anything but he's obviously not using a derringer. Maybe a gun from the 'Old West' but other than that... Not seein' it. Oh and food for thought for the next chapter: Your guy's going to an American Public High School right? Pretty sure his hunting pistol's not gonna fly.
The gun aside, I really can't wait to read more. Very much looking forward to it.