Reviews for The Luckiest Girl
Cullenland chapter 1 . 7/20/2017
lovely. i don't like so much when the couples are mixed but i feel that was really sweet their relationship. sorry for Esme but she really acted like a bitch.
you really did a great job, thank you for sharing
parkesy23 chapter 1 . 5/26/2017
Loved it thanks
winterhorses chapter 1 . 3/19/2017
Thanks for a great CxB story! It was really sweet!
Costa Fanficfan chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
When I started to read this fic, I was in doubt. Bella breaking apart Carlisle and Esme? Didn't sound good to my taste.

And then, I was surprised to see how your Esme... wasn't exactly a standard Esme, to say the least. Canon Esme would shake her head, in pity or disgust, seeing how she treated her Carlisle. Are you sure you weren't modelling her after Jessica? Or, even better, Lauren?_:-P

I just loved the slow build you created, making Bella and Carlisle go from friends, to feeling like family, and finally morphing into soulmates. And they did that in a way that nothing weighs on their conscience; there's nothing to mar what they feel for each other.

Not everyone can acomplish that, so I congratulate you, Mama. That was really good writing. I'm pleasantly surprised._-
Lya Long chapter 1 . 2/6/2015
She really the luckiest bitch! I know I'm a hater and jealousy is no good but damn I want it too. :P More seriously, your Os is very good and pretty. I feel a certain shyness in the lemon part but it's not really disturbing. I hope you write more in the future so on this I'm gonna put it in my favorites. Thanks for sharing 3
Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
Great story. I loved it!

Kathy :D
Allons-y 23 chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
I just stumbled across this story on another person's fav. page. I search for the selected characters of Carlisle and Bella, and this story doesn't come up that way. I'm so glad I chanced upon. It's a delightful story. I absolutely adore it. Thank you.
1Lavishone chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
One of 2 stories I've ever read where C/E didn't squick me out. And the only one where I wanted to slap Esme! LOL
jhsdishidjmc chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
I loved this, it was great. I do think the you could have written a story to go with this about Esme coming home, I would have liked that. But ya, I loved this!
MinaRivera chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Great one-shot, I really enjoyed. Thank you for sharing it. xoxo Mina
BelleBD chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I absolutely loved it. I love reading Bella with Carlisle, I think it started with that scene in New Moon when he's stitching her up. There was just something there. I have to admit that I was a little scared while reading it since Carlisle started out dating Esme but I loved the way the transition to Bella took place. They really did just fit. I kind of wish there was more story. Thank you so much for giving me the link to this story earlier.
Bell 1 chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Awwwwww... I LOVED IT!

My heart is happy with this story. :D

I'm so speechless that I don't know how to express my thoughts or feelings for this story right now.
cloemarrie chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Wow another great one!

This one was beautifully written like the rest. The only thin' I couldn't get over was how Bella got with her sister's ex. But like they say ya can't control who ya fall in love with. I loved this story no matter what though :). Well on to the next one and see ya in another review.
tawelephant chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Loved it!
Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
I. Love. This!
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