|Reviews for Harry EvansWell it should be Potter|
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/27
Please have Sirius and Lily fuck
| just.a.blue.jay chapter 8 . 11/29/2011
I like the plot of the story, but I think you need to touch up the grammar and sentence structure. It sometimes gets slightly hard to read but I love your story anyway. PLease don't take this the wrong way, I'm just trying to offer some advice. Great story so far and update soon!
| just.a.blue.jay chapter 7 . 8/25/2011
I really like the idea and the plot so far, but I think you need to edit some of your chapters. There were certain parts where the grammar or the wording just didn't make sense. I really like the story but I think if you went back and proofread the chapters this story would be fantastic. I really want to see what happens. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| Bri P chapter 6 . 8/12/2011
You should totally continue with this story. i luv it. ) Update soon!
| Bri P chapter 4 . 6/5/2011
I love this story! You should totally get Lily and Sirius together and NOT HAVE SIRIUS DIE! Update soon!
| sadness chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Hey u jerk! This story sux ( jk I didn't even read it) would u pls come down and help me with this stupid game! Pretty pls with remmy and snuffles on top? Luv ya birdie
-love ur absolutely amazing sister ashy! :)
| nine-orcids chapter 2 . 5/13/2011
this is awesome, can't wait for the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/11/2011
| kewliobeans chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
This story could be interesting...*presses alert button*