Reviews for The Awakening of a Royal
cielokhr chapter 1 . 6/18
Can u pls continue ur story IT'S REALLLLLY REALLY GOOD u know. pls reconsider finishing it i enjoy reading it u know
Chelsea-Ann Patr chapter 17 . 7/27/2019
Blaise is male not female
httpswww.fanf chapter 25 . 12/14/2016
ma alora come e andata afinire...da merda
Percy Harry 3 chapter 13 . 2/6/2016
Great story, but Blaze Zabini is a guy.
Guest chapter 25 . 3/26/2015
You never finished this! why!
Brownies3 chapter 25 . 7/27/2014
Phoenix-Fire-Queen chapter 25 . 10/24/2013
You probably dont even remember this story but i do with you gave it a second look and returned to it. I really love what you have done!
Guest chapter 25 . 9/1/2013
It's a shame this fic is abandoned :(
Anon chapter 8 . 6/10/2013
You aren't explaining things very well at all. It seems as though you are forgetting that the reader doesn't see everything as it is in your head.

Silverdawn is Severus Snape's goddaughter - yet he doesn't realize that she has been glamoured for some reason yet unknown? And he fainted at the sight of her because she resembled a lost love of his, yet he didn't question her about her appearance when he regained consciousness?

Hermione has not been confronted by her friends about the changes in her appearance? It was unrealistic how she simply went along with aiding Professor Snape at the behest of Silverdawn who - before this - she has had little to no interaction with. There has been very little depth in her character, as well. If she is supposed to be the main character, or if the main romance and plot centers around her, you should give more insight into how she is interpreting the changes in her self and the world around her.

Snape is OOC but that makes sense with this plot, and his interactions with Hermione, while his feelings aren't well elaborated on, can be passed off.

Still, I would advise you to go back and try and find the instances where you didn't give the appropriate information. I realize there are things you are trying to keep hidden for suspense, but there are so many minor things that I am afraid you are just forgetting to mention that would really help the readers.
lilypadXXdramione chapter 9 . 6/2/2013
The year that you turn 17 you are lower sixth form or year 12 in the uk
XxDyiashiaxX chapter 25 . 2/27/2013
This is really good please write more soon
tania chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
I have to say this story is good, but really confusing, I feel like its rushed and the characters of HP suddenly became someone else...The idea is amazing though.
Shorty653 chapter 25 . 1/11/2012
Aww, this was soo good, why did you never update again? I enjoyed reading this alot.
midnightangel09 chapter 4 . 8/2/2011
So while im reallying enjoying the story what does all this have to do with hermione? Are you changeing the flow of the story cuz ur mainly focusing on the oc characters while thats fine and all but it seems as if u onlu mention hermione in passing as if she is not a factor in the story...plz let me kno if any of this is supposed to lead up to hermione and her change or if you just changed the story altogether? Dnt worry im not gonna stop reading i just want to kno so i wnt be disappointed in the end cuz i exspected one thing and got another

midnightangel09 chapter 25 . 8/2/2011
Sigh i have to say while i enjoyed the story i was mainly lost the entire time and had to keep going back and re-read some chapters and as it turns out you might wanna change the herm/sev dealvand put draco/oc maybe idk its just a thought. it really is a well thought out plot and the charcters are most original i have seen as of yet in all my time in reading fanfiction but the story in of itself is a little jumbled and kinda hard to follow if ur not paying close attention but over all i still enjoyed the story and i must admit i hope you continue the story i look forward to the next chapter
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