|Reviews for Mission: Roanapur|
| Luis el invitado chapter 15 . 5/3
Excelente historia hermano, y con ese final, puedo imaginar fácilmente a un viejo canadiense queriendo salvar a esa ciudad a la que irán.
| Shaman Psyker chapter 16 . 5/12/2014
Dude you paint a beautifully badass story man I not a fan of the punisher or Black Lagoon but the way you write is making me one. You capture the spirit of both the comic and manga SOOO well! The violence the action of the characters the ambiguous ending of the story I fucking loved it all MAN!Keep up the good work!
| Gene Akizuki chapter 16 . 10/29/2013
Oh man, this is really nice. Hope there's a sequel
| Psycho2112 chapter 16 . 9/17/2013
Very interesting. Don't know how I really feel about this story, I kind of like it, yet not. I highly doubt Roanapur would've gone down that fast, regardless of the Punisher. I will say Fury's involvement was rather overkill though. As far as Eda's story, mixed about that too. Kinda mad at her setting those soldiers up, but I'm pissed to high hell that those scumbags murdered some guy in South America for pure political reasons. I do share Fury's sentiments about the CIA, fuck em. Traitorous bastards.
| Alex Retzer chapter 16 . 12/12/2012
Really enjoyed your story! I read from beginning to end and never felt like you were being too wordy or non-descriptive. The believaebility of the dialogue, not to mention Rock's own actions throughout really sealed the deal. This is one of the best fics on next to broken birds fly to Roanapur.
I liked how you handled the final few chapters, with Hotel Moscow's end seeming bitter sweet. You never portrayed the characters as cardboard cut out villains. Revy also came off believable in how she felt about Rock's actions to protect her and Dutch.
Bravo and hope you continue writing fanfiction.
| StealthyLabRat chapter 16 . 9/14/2012
Beautiful story, I couldn't stop reading :D hope to hear more fanfics in the black lagoon department
| StealthyLabRat chapter 9 . 9/10/2012
I love the story so far, it's really beautifully written, but try to make revys profanities more clever rather than "what the f*ck is f*cking wrong with you f*cking f*ckhead?!" try something like "what the f*ck is your problem a*shole?!"
| Fayneir chapter 16 . 8/27/2012
Awesome. Its been a while since I read a Punisher crossover fic that was good, the last was a Harry Potter cross that was supposed to have a sequel but didn't. : / / www . fanfiction s / 4547694 / 1 / James _ Castle.
A brilliant read.
| Judah chapter 16 . 5/14/2012
You did justice to the characters. Good job.
| Secret Weapon Unit 06 chapter 15 . 5/6/2012
Madripoor? Then the Lagoon company is fucked. Either by Jessie or Daken.
| sonicsucks12 chapter 16 . 5/5/2012
Nice story, Frank Shoula have landed a bullet in Revy's arm or something like that to show who the true one man army is. I'm sorry as a fan of Frank, Revy may be incredibly badass, but Frank Castle is the God of Badass killers and combat pragmatists. Frank if he wanted would make Revy into a christan evangelist the second after he tortures her.
I think Castle would easily kill Revy since he's kicked Spider-Mans ass and man handled his fair share of the top streel levelers and demi gods in Marvel. But thats my opinion.
And Nick Mothafuckin Fury is just overkilling. Seriously his badassery equals over 400 chuck norris and kaminas. Balakia and Chang would be his hoes if he wanted them to be.
But good story, rock x revy is a tension in it's self, and I believe Revy is insecrue about wanting to feel positive feelings again, but Rock brings that out excellently. Plus the story is handled and Punisher totally kicked serious amounts of ass in the supposed most dangerous city in the world.
I hope you write another fic again.
| Paul Cousins chapter 15 . 4/19/2012
I found this story insteresting, but very oneside and unbalanced.
That said, you left the most dangerious group Roanapur live. The Lagoon Company. Plus, Sawyer, Shenhua and Rotten The Wizard.
And they are heading for Madripoor, and they will running that city within a year.
Also, a crazy as it sounds, Balalaika, Chang and Boris may have survived that explosion.
And you did say that the building could survive an airstrike. The building may be destroyed, but those in could be alive.
I have seen crazier survival scenes Black Lagoon series and the Marvel Comics series.
Though, they would probably seriously injured, and gone into hiding to recover, probably in Madripoor as well. Which they would hook up with the Lagoon Company.
Keep in mind that Balalaika got her scars by surviving an explosion at point blank range.
Eda will likely soon no long be a part of the CIA. She is not one for desk jobs, Roanapur has corrupted to her.
So, she may likely hit to Madripoor well, and meet the Lagoon Company.
And Eda knows Nick Fury is mostly responsive what happened Roanapur, and I am sure she will tell Lagoon Company.
The only reason that Fury and his team got off so lightly was become those in Roanapur did not know he and his group were the team helping Castle.
That would no longer be the case. And revenge would be sweet. God help Shield when Lagoon Company, and the rest team up to go after Nick Fury Shield.
Nick may be one of the top ten most dangerous people in that world, but he made enemies of the other nine people on that list.
| Tears of Deathwishxxx chapter 16 . 2/7/2012
Ah, the deleted scene I was waiting for. I wondered how Fury got those weapons and equipment.
This is very well written. And whatever Eda's boss said to her, she got gone very quickly. Her and the Rip-Off Church.
You get my seal of approval on this. As always.
| Tears of Deathwishxxx chapter 15 . 2/7/2012
Totally forgot to review this, as I thought the last chapter was the end of it all.
Anyway, that's what happens when your source is income is no longer available. You move on. Rock makes a good point.
With that being said, my French-Canadian friend, you've done it again. Lot of action, you did well on the dialogue, and it seems like there'll be something that can equate to law and order in Sinner's Paradise.
Awesome ending, as the Lagoon Company sails into the sunset.
| Mo Eazy chapter 16 . 1/4/2012
You've done good work here, Punisher fits right in with Roanapur. Not quite MAX Punisher, but also not quite MK Punisher, somewhere in between those two, your Castle lays. I do think he cussed too much in his inner monologues, if I remember correctly Castle was actually pretty clean with his language despite his attitude. But it has been awhile since I've read the comics.
The ending was a bit over the top, wavering between "Good" extremes and "Wut?". I think the five hundred men they gathered is a bit ridiculous, even for the Triads. The use of tanks was also kinda extreme, I have to ponder the logistics of all these things. Same goes with the 1000lbs of C-4, but I can enjoy that because it feels like some crazy shit Garth Ennis would pull anyway.
I really liked that bonus chapter with Fury and the Church of Violence. I admit that whole Grey Fox story arc was a little tough for me to read in some parts, because I'm good friends with my next door neighbor's son and he's Army Special Forces. That said I can appreciate the clusterfuck that was woven there, things like that are completely plausible, sadly. It might be a bit patriotic and American of me (why is that such a bad thing these days?) but I like to see people get their come-uppance and Eda had it coming bad. Nick Fury is just the son-of-a-bitch for the job, too.
Anyway, nice work, I wouldn't mind seeing more Marvel Crossovers with Black Lagoon as long as they're like this in that the two universes don't clash, they meld. Wolverine is always good for a dark bloodbath of a tale, but I think a Deadpool story could be absolutely hilarious. Both of them get around so it isn't out of the realm of possibility for them to meet the Black Lagoon crew.