|Reviews for Beneath the Mask|
| Booklover9477 chapter 18 . 5/14/2012
Awesome chapter! I loved Richards (I can not say "dick's") point of view. Haha being inside his head is just fantastic and it's cool seeing the contrast between his and starfires thought process and experiences. Keep up the amazing work! Can't wait to read more! Until next time, Laila :k
| chibisamasempai20 chapter 18 . 4/15/2012
this fic is as great as Masks. cheers. :)
| Saphire Raider chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Can u do chpt 28 I think it is from masks in robin pov. Where they meet Tim after the gang fight and starfire gets saved. Tim's mom is on the roof. That chapter. Love your work
| AoKanojo chapter 8 . 9/21/2011
And indeed, the awesomeness is here. I chuckle madly over this chapter no matter how many times I read it. I think it's the part when Star bursts out in excitement about the sex shop and preparation in front of Bruce, while the two men look at each other awkwardly-while Bruce sees if he can get some that night also. Haha.
Sex shops are crazy places though. Anything you might have thought of, they probably have. Although, it seems like there's way more stuff for women than for men-mostly all the male-shaped objects out there. And all of it is very sparkly or whatnot.
Thank you for being oh-so-entertaining as always :D
| AoKanojo chapter 7 . 9/21/2011
I love seeing the two of them work together like this-obviously, the Teen Titans as a group complement each other well, but it's nice to see it on a smaller scale, especially seeing Star and Robin together. Which only makes me think of how it would be to have Raven and BB working together. Hmmm.
And now for the most awesome part: sex shop shopping! Well, I'm sure that's for the next chapter, but awesomeness is about to happen. *zooms on over*
As per usual, thanks for taking the time to write! Your creativity and story-telling is much enjoyed and appreciated :)
| AoKanojo chapter 6 . 9/21/2011
I do have to say, I was surprised that Star had no idea that it was Robin behind the mask. He *did* drop a lot of hints...I guess it has to be chalked up to the fact that Star was thrown off balance, being out of her element in another city and trying to hide who she is. I would have thought, though, she'd have had at least a few suspicions, if not outright knowing it was the Boy Wonder.
Hmm, there's that "sprung" again. I need to go see the different meanings for it, I think I usually associate it in relation to traps and stuff like that, rather than what meanings you give it. Again, you're probably right, and I just have a limited mental meaning for it.
| AoKanojo chapter 5 . 9/21/2011
I know I'm backtracking to review, and I know Jason was good at the end, but still...I never actually read the comics for Batman, so I know very little about him, other than he seems to be a giant prick. Good guys do not throw sharp pointy things into people, that's what the *bad* guys do. Poor Star. Good thing she's Tamaranian.
And although I'm relatively low maintenance myself, I must agree that we women can be very confusing in our beauty regimens. The myriad of things that females can do for their appearance is mind boggling. So I'm sure men would relate with Robin's perspective there.
Last thought: Robin should have charged porn to Bruce's account. That would just have been hilarious. Would never happen, but it's a funny thought.
| AoKanojo chapter 4 . 9/21/2011
One thing I was curious about...when people are taken aback, they jerk back, "stung," don't they? "Sprung" isn't the word I would normally think of, although you've used that in this chapter and chapter 3. Not saying that it's incorrect, it may simply be an application of the word I'm unused to seeing.
And that is kind of sad, that Starfire can ask a "random stranger" (with the irony being that it's actually the man in question) about sexually related stuff rather than speaking directly with Robin. Well, then again, communication in relationships can be difficult, so I suppose I shouldn't totally slam Robin on that. But yes. And I love when Starfire breaks out Tamaranian vocab for insulting English slang.
I'll keep the reviews coming, and move on to your last magnum opus that you have for fanfic. If you get something published, let me know! I want to get it :D
| AoKanojo chapter 3 . 9/21/2011
Hmmmm, headboard banging against the wall. Classy. :D I do have to say, I'm not sure why one would want a pair of undies with your name on it, but hey, cool beans. And I thought it was pretty funny when Starfire exclaims in horror when asked what Robin may be doing with her thong :P
And yes, Robin needs to actually says the "L" word one of these days, that big chicken. I'm sure he'll man up eventually though.
| SwampBandit chapter 18 . 8/26/2011
I stopped reading this a chapter 8 a few weeks ago, then started reading the named chapters last night while at football practice (love my iPhone) any way, loved at as always lots of fun and not too many hammers.
I liked how Dick and Kory's relationship grew in the named chapters.
The absolute best part though is Raven giving Dick sex advice, that was just hilarious. Especially with the deadpan voice. It seems like she was enjoying it too.
I know you said Promise was you last on FanFiction and that's a little sad. I will miss your writing. You make them seem so real. Good work.
| chicagobabe chapter 18 . 8/11/2011
chapter, story is just amazing!
& the ending is just awh! i know i probably told you this already but damn just love the way you write,its deep. lol. i honestly think yuo should publish books. it would sell millions (;
| La Belle Rose Noire chapter 18 . 8/9/2011
you should do one that goes with chapter 23. i'd love to see where his head was at during the moment. what he was thinking from his pov would really make my day :) just a thought
| AoKanojo chapter 2 . 8/9/2011
Ah, hormonal boyness. Not sure if there is any one feature of a man that seems to generally stun women into stupefaction like boobies / cleavage can do to men.
Robin is so much more fun when he doesn't have to be a hardass like his dad...if he was more "Red X"-ish more often, he'd be far more amusing. Though, I guess he needs his control freak personality in order to deal with managing the Titans.
Thanks again for writing; hopefully someday in the near future I can read your original stuff!
| AoKanojo chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Going backwards, as I can't see that I reviewed the previous ones. I get so excited when I read your stories (and you might have seen me blaze through them and review at breakneck speed) that I forget to review sometimes.
I guess when it comes to combat, Robin is still superior even though Starfire trained with the Warlords of Okaara? Perhaps she didn't have as much time training as Robin did, due to the conflict between Tamaran and the Citadel? Then again, it may be also because she's trying not to really cut loose and harm anyone? (which is probably one of the main reasons)
This story is so cute having it from two perspectives, so you get to be inside of each of their heads. As always, thanks for writing! Lovely stuffs.
| AoKanojo chapter 11 . 8/9/2011
I was most amused by the Author's Note at the end of this chapter P I've always been curious what it's like in a strip joint as I've never been...and like you I wouldn't care if my significant other was in one as long as it was just for looking.
It's interesting how some people can be very relaxed towards such places (like Star, although her culture is different) and some can harbor such hostility. Guess it all depends on the couple in question and if they feel secure together.
Can't remember if I reviewed the previous chapters...I'll have to go back and see O_o But thanks again for writing! I'll miss you when you go!