Reviews for Burnt |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, with all of this I honestly forgot we have a slight problem like Quirrelmort. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this is not how veritaserum works at all. Unless he got administered a whole cocktail of potions. Xenophilius Lovegood makes more sense compared. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Leaving one unnamed auror guarding Dumbles? Uh-oh... |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's the most OOC Dumbdumb I've seen so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't tell me fricking Harry had become a father... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, what? What a sudden turn off the story for worse. What is this spontaneous animagis transformation and into magical creature too? That's some piano in the bushes, magical Deus ex machina bullshit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahahaha, nice scene! Gives some SCP vibe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ye, that was my gripe with canon Lupin too. Also, interesting development with Harry James Potter-Snape-Moody. Will he need multiple wives for all three lines too,hehe? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Surprisingly nice severitus. You should post that tag somewhere, I did not expect it. Truth be told, I was afraid of another edgelord anime protagonist Harry with all his initial injuries and magical prosthetics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, what. Dursleys pulling this shit off was evil, but Dumbdumb is some fucking dark lord to do that as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter got me in stitches |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very accurate portrayal of our so called doctors I would say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a really unique story but really well done. usually something this unique is hard to read or enjoy, but you wrote it perfectly. thanks for sharing it! |
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