|Reviews for If Only|
| Omnitrix 12 chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
Nice pairing, and good use of description. It feels a bit rushed with them jumping to the kiss, and it leaves me wanting to know where they go from here (hopefully that's not rushed too), but not too shabby all around. Out of ten, I give it a seven-and-a-half. Also, having Razor almost ruin the moment with that mop remark was a brilliant touch.
Any chance of a follow-up?
On the Victory Side,
| dax0042 chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
I like this. It was good.
| pokygirl2001 chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
"Well, from this angle it looks like you've been trying to make out with the mop for the past five minutes." Chance admitted, smirking suddenly and inwardly wishing that he had taken a picture. "Is that what you were trying to do?"
Oh that whole thing was adorable.
| Remedy's Melody 109 chapter 2 . 8/30/2013
| marati2011 chapter 2 . 4/25/2013
Wish there had been a kiss in the series between them
| marati2011 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Oh, poor, love is well, right?
| jazamyne chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
oh come on! please write more PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
| bluedragon1998 chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
Awsome job! Mop first time then callie. Histerical!
| Shadowdragon31 chapter 2 . 7/15/2011
hahahaha! I loved it!It was awesome!
| Kyuubi No Tenshi chapter 2 . 7/2/2011
This was good.
| Kyuubi No Tenshi chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Hahahaha! Poor Jake! Why do I think someone else tried to kiss a mop? A, who cares, this is is capital L O L!
| WinxPossible chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
'I'm not kissing the mop again, am I?'
HAHAHAHA! Oh. My. HAHAHA! Romantic and awsome! Can a sequel appear for this?
| WinxPossible chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
HAHAHA! Making out with a mop! HAHAHA!
| Female Heero Yuy chapter 2 . 4/23/2011
Needs vast improvement, has no actual plot...it would of been nice if you had a plot. Chapters are too short.
| UltimateWarriorFan4Ever chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
I felt like Razor was gonna get his ass kicked by Callie for mistaking her for a mop! Hilarious!