|Reviews for Sandra's Story|
| Onionmaster chapter 6 . 11/22/2011
I LOVE this story! Keep it up! :D :D :D
| CMBaggs chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Not bad. Nice to see that Sandra's unique abilities manifested in slightly more subtle ways until she was scared.
Your punctuation, exposition and dialogue need work. The flashback was a giant info dump that could have been solved with a more narrowed POV. I mean, you start off by saying that Sandra is remembering this day twenty years ago... but at the age twenty-two that would have made her two at the time of the story. Not four. Secondly... how could Sandra "remember" the discussion at the inn? Was she there?
| BetaRho chapter 3 . 8/19/2011
Great character development thus far, loving the background story for our group's favorite NPC. Keep up the good work Enocher
| Nashika Yuki chapter 3 . 7/22/2011
I liked your story very much. Funny thing is I was thinking of making a story of a bounty hunter who hunts your type of charater. I haven't started it yet but it is in the planning stages Great plot and charater devolpment I can't wait for the next chapter :)
| vanitas24 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Nice. Good (overused, but whatev. Don't fix what ain't broken) plot.