Reviews for How It Should Have Happened
novelreader chapter 4 . 6/11/2015
I'm appalled that Morgana actually thought Uther would approve of her marrying Merlin. It doesn't make sense. If she knows that he would have her and Merlin killed for possessing or using magic, then why would she expect something different from him if she asked him one thing that would grant her happiness. How do you come with this?

Anyway, aside from how everything went, you did a really good job with making sure everyone was in character, even if some of them made stupid decisions, to be fair they made stupid choices in the show as well, and at least Merlin here was smart enough to help someone when they needed it most. Anyway... the romance, it was magical!
novelreader chapter 2 . 6/11/2015
Okay I love the chapter. Not sure about Merlin back-talking to an ancient dragon who is either looking out for him for some reason, or manipulating him to the point that he'll be released. After all, Merlin makes the vow or promise to the Dragon after begging for a way to stop the sleeping curse and it turns out he had to kill Morgana to do it, wouldn't have happened if he told her and she wouldn't have gone to Morgause who put the curse on her afterwards. I really feel bad for them, such legendary people, in the end pawns of others. Anyway great chapter.
guest123 chapter 4 . 3/7/2015
nice chapter cant wait to see what happens next
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
alllll i can sy is that i love it!
Dan Riddle chapter 4 . 2/12/2012
Your story is great, M/M are so sweet to each other and their relationship is so full of harmony! Well, a little bit of naive from Morgana to believe that Uther would seriously consider her request, lol!
Gemmaaaaa chapter 4 . 10/17/2011
I'm not ashamed to say I cried. A lot. Seriously your an amazing writer! It's such a good story! I love Merlin and Morgana's deep heartfelt love for each other! xxx
Reviewer Who chapter 4 . 5/10/2011
Fantastic! I loved it and can't wait to read the continuation.
Mrs. Bonner chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
I just read this story and I LOVED it! This totally could have happened if Merlin had made a different choice. You are a very good writer. Now I'm looking forward to reading "Morgana's Revenge"...
Eidolon02 chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
Ah, damn, it's over!

Can I just say how much I love your M/M? Very sweet and heartfelt. You do a great job of showing just how much Merlin and his genuine love means to her after a lifetime of shallow suitors. Her desire to have her cake and eat it too, and her stubborn refusal to face reality, is heartbreaking and classic Morgana. Worse still is the knowledge that she's about to get Merlin killed. (Or is he? Dun dun dun...)

I enjoyed this story a hell of a lot. You have a real knack for writing this couple (for writing period) and I hope you make more. We have a responsibility to keep the M/M alive now that the show has nuked them.

Thank you for the wonderful ride. _
ArodieltheElfofRohan chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
Aw, this was good. But I already read Morgana's Revenge, so I know how sad it becomes! ;(

Great idea for a fic, though! I really enjoyed it. :)
Megagalvatron12 chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
awsome story uther just can't let his kids be happy can he
JAIMOL chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
It's a very beautiful but very sad. I liked to see how the relationship started Merlin and Morgana. Cursed Uther, do not let the couple be happy.
ArodieltheElfofRohan chapter 3 . 4/4/2011
Ah! This is so good. :) Please update soon! ;)
ArodieltheElfofRohan chapter 2 . 4/4/2011
For some reason I wasn't expecting Merlin to tell her so suddenly. But hey, it's fine with me! lol :)
ShayanaDaughterOfEmrys chapter 3 . 4/3/2011
I love this story! I'm so glad Merlin told her about his magic, I've always thought he should and often wondered what would have happened if he had...

Please update soon!
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