Reviews for Your Heart's keeper
Jol chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
it was cool, i learned a new word, "juxtapose" but i think you could improve a little on the grammar. :)
for example,
" Hadn't I told you to handle those with care" Oojiro exclaimed suddenly
it should be "haven't"
maybe show a little more play before the sexy scenes.
i personally dont write, so i wouldnt know, but i love reading so i hope this helps!
Broken.Bells chapter 2 . 7/11/2011
Honestly, these oneshots make me glad that you took time out of your day to make us fans happy. Even though you don't have a lot of reviews, please keep posting the stories. I will review everytime you put one up, if I can ;) Thank you so much.
Winter Midnight chapter 2 . 6/19/2011
Awww! They're really cute so far. Maybe you could do one revolving around the new wife cosplay? It's a thought :)
seasaltchocolate chapter 2 . 6/10/2011
Well, since the FTAK fandom IS so pitiful, i suppose i can drop a review your way. ;) you have very sweet ideas here, but they do need some brushing up. Your set could be one of the best stories on the FTAK FF; all you need are a few pointers. If you're interested, look me up and PM me. I'd love to see an awesome fic out there! :) keep up the writing!
catstop chapter 2 . 5/5/2011
Ahhhhh...I love it! Please write more!
Varietyisthespiceoflife chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Awwww! This is great! We need more FTAK stories! Love it! Please update soon!