Reviews for Playing the game
Hawki chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Regular punctuation errors for dialogue, with full stops being used in place of commas. As for the's okay. It feels like the start of something larger, in that the revelation at the end feels more like a plot development than a conclusion. It's an interesting concept, just not sure it's enough to stand on its own at this length.
MissAllieMae chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
I like it. I like this potrayal of Nott, as opposed to the extreme death eater view of him
ThePink1 at Reefside.Net chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Padma looked at Parvati. "These things just keep getting wilder and wilder, don't they, sis?" Parvati just nodded mutely, thinking of a quiet study-break in the library interrupted just that way, only it had been HER and Nott, and he'd actually done more than just suggest a 'disciplinary rendesvous' ...

Yipes! Getting away before the plot bunnies rear their heads, Yellow. Catch ya on the flipside, A J.
Qilin chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
I like this, totally made me smile! He seems more like what a real Slytherin should be than how most of them were portrayed in the books.