|Reviews for Torn|
| Calamitatum chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Good god that took quite the turn there. I was fully suspecting h/c ladeeda with a little bit of angst thrown in. I guess I really aught to take more heed from the summary warnings. You did, afterall, say darkfic. Hmm.
Anyway, that was definitely an interesting take on Dean's little Hell experience. The whole 'it revealed you' thing gave me the chills. As did the line about the wounds on Cas's back being tears, as opposed to cuts. Man, now I'm just sitting here shivering and hissing quietly to myself.
Either way, this was exceptionally well written, and kind of creepy, so by default, I love it.
| Aisukuri-Mu Studio chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I don't...I don't know what to say. o.o Holy cow.
| Dr. Anna Laufreyson chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
This was beautiful... but it hurt the soul.
I love a good horror writer.
| RedRopeFrayed chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
This is really good. It's the second time I've read it, and it's still really good. Aside from being completely emotionally damaging, that is. I love how you wrote Dean!
| beatlesbird chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
That was... just absolutely brilliant. A little morbid - but what is Supernatural without a little horror
| Magma Rose chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
holy crap. amazing story.
| whithoutH8 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Wow ...just ...wow. You are amazing.
| Moonlight Calls chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
This is perfect. Yes, yes it is and it made me cry lol.
| northofantastic chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
This story is just so painful to read, but it's so beautifully written that I can't help myself. I've read it a few times now and I always end up crying a bit at the end. I just wanted to say that despite being a wee bit horrific, it's lovely.
| Zephyira chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Really enjoyed that, loved the butterfly references and the flashback there, Dean would tear the wings off of anyone who did that to Cas, good job and nice writing, I love so many of your stories :)
| Lillz chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Wow. dark and twisted. very powerful. Poor Cas. Those bastards...
Beware the wrath of the Righteous Man.
| Maddy77 chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Oh, man. This was excellent. Beautifully written, with perfect voices and great pacing. You left enough to our imaginations to make sure it was as awful as possible while providing all the right details to paint a picture for us. I seriously can't praise the work you did enough. Thank you for sharing this with us.
| SeventhRing chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
I'm a fan of torture scenes. You write good ones.
| andaere chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Wow. This is incredibly dark. It touches on an important character trait of Dean that writers often ignore, though - he's a torturer. And he'll do anything to protect those he loves.
I really, really love your writing. Not to belittle any other authors here, but so many fanfic authors just tell a story. There's nothing wrong with that, and the story can be awesome. But you - you can really write. I was going to list all of the quotes in this story that I love, but there's so many. But every story of yours that I've read, there are lines that really resonate with me - either because they're beautifully written or perfect for the character (or both). Like in this story - I could so clearly see the scene with Dean and the butterflies, and you had soulless!Sam down perfectly. You really get into the characters' heads, and then you describe it in a way I can understand completely, and visualize easily. I can even hear your dialogue in my head. Are you secretly a writer of the show? xD
Anyways. Sorry, got distracted by your awesomeness. Back to this story - it's dark, but I love it. I adore hurt!Cas and caring/protective!Dean, and Bobby was amazing in this as well. It's all too easy to imagine Dean reacting this way, too. It was chilling that the angels reenacted Dean's torturing methods on Cas, and touching and in character that Cas still called for Dean. Also, thank you for not actually describing Dean torturing Josiah - what you did instead was much more chilling than gratituous gore.
Thank you for being so awesome and writing so many truly amazing Supernatural stories. Sorry for spamming your email. :)
| Makoto04 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
woahhhhh gosebumbs and everything, loved it...
Dean avanges Cas... woahhh, badass, cool