|Reviews for Not Your Average Paradise|
| Amanda Malin chapter 6 . 3/19
I absolutely LOVED this story! I remember reading it a couple of years ago and now I found it again. By the way, I'm very glad you didn't kill Steve. I don't think my heart could have handled that ;)
| Thousandsmiles chapter 6 . 10/7/2015
This was great. Gal you went with this version.
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/6/2014
Definitely would have hated it if you had killed Steve off! Definitely loved it the way you wrote it! You are a great writer! Love the stories that I have read by you-especially this one and the one you wrote before it.
| Belker chapter 6 . 6/17/2012
I really loved this! Thanks :)
| Miyako Hiragawa chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
I'm glad you didn't kill Steve, I like this ending. Good story.
| wotumba1 chapter 6 . 9/27/2011
glad you wrote this one instead!
another great story! too bad you decided to stop this story-arc here, would have liked some more ;-)
| wotumba1 chapter 5 . 9/27/2011
how can you do that to me?
now that i have to leave and wait at least an hour to read the next chapter?
| wotumba1 chapter 4 . 9/27/2011
poor danny! hope steve can get grace to safety!
| wotumba1 chapter 3 . 9/27/2011
ROFL at sawyer's confession (hannah montana)
poor grace, being there
| wotumba1 chapter 2 . 9/27/2011
my guess would be that this whole op is not nearly going as smooth as planned, wouldn't be steve to have everything work out in his favor here ;-)
| wotumba1 chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
he's back! great that i come back to find another story (better being late finding them then never!)
gotta love the seal-side of steve ;-)
| Sneezus chapter 6 . 7/26/2011
Thank goodness you didn't kill Steve! I really thought he was going to die.
| lynnrxgal chapter 6 . 5/13/2011
This was a GREAT story! Thanks so much for sharing with us!
| francis2 chapter 6 . 4/24/2011
I'm glad you didn't kill Steve, though he might want to be dead with the headaches pretty soon.
| francis2 chapter 3 . 4/24/2011
Uh oh. I need to read on, no time to comment...