Reviews for Dark Desires
Guest chapter 25 . 2/16
I was on chapter ten and I literally had to come here to see if they were still together even after Yugi found out what Yami did XDD
I HAVE NO PATIENCE
Zena McClain chapter 8 . 10/23/2016
Sorry about that.

The last word was detailed lemons I tried to put a space between them but I accidentally pressed post review by accident again sorry about that.
Zena McClain chapter 8 . 10/23/2016
By any chance is there any lemons in the story, a dark lemon, a very very long and detailedlemons
Zena McClain chapter 8 . 10/23/2016
Will Yami/Atem be the one to tell Yugi what he did or will Yugi find out another way and ignore Yami/Atem for a long of time. It would be funny if Yugi punched Yami/Atem in the face are stomach? But that's just what I think you did great but I would like it if the story was a little bit longer maybe 50 pages or 75 or 110 pages it's just that I like long stories. There's a story call bones, the high school I went to had the book it was in comic book form the separate books would be there t or more; but no more then 9 in total my high school had it all together Sikkim total number of pages is 3333, I want it in less than a week, it was probably 2 or 3 days when I finished.
Zena McClain chapter 7 . 10/23/2016
Sorry I accidentally pressed post review by accident. When I mentioned about Atem/Yami Bing the one who killed Yugi Grandfather, that was supposet to be number 1, and the 1 marked number 1 it's supposed to be number 2. Tell me what do you think of what are wrote here and email me back by going to
Zena McClain chapter 7 . 10/23/2016
Just like Marik killed Maliks parents, DID Yami/Atem do the same?

There are two things that I would do, (1. When Yugi had to tell his friends why he was gone for so long, he could have told them that Yami/Atem dehydrated or starving or severely wounded that it took a long time to recover.
YurukaMuto A.S.M chapter 5 . 10/13/2015
Good story, but I prefer to think that it was attempted rape that Neko commited, so thats Yugi was still a virgin so Yami would be his first. And also Yugi was from an abusive home , was graduated, and had no friends until he met Yami and the others. Oh , and that he used to be suicidale. (If I misspelled something,sorry.)
Dark angel chapter 16 . 5/15/2015
Noooo... When you said character death, I thought for a slight chance it would be Neko. I want him dead! He's getting in the way of everything!
Dark angel chapter 12 . 5/14/2015
WHAT THE FUCK IS NEKOS PROBLEM! Man, didn't he throw Yugi away and put him through all that shit! Oh my god! And what is he?! A vampire hunter? WTF!
MsDementedCookie chapter 3 . 2/5/2015
:O YAMI, YOU ASSHOLE!
Pequeio Gato chapter 3 . 10/18/2014
Why,Yami? WHYYYY! *sob* poor Yugi...
What's your problem,man?! Little Yugi deserves better than a abusive lover! That's it! I'm going to Bakura's side! Yami is evil!
Cyanide Jewel chapter 25 . 5/14/2014
Yami No Tenshi: hehehehehehe love the ending and i REALLY love the way that Neko died _ and i cant believe Marik kept his promise about a chocolate covered Yugi. knowing him, he wouldn't have
Marik: hey, im not that cruel. -pouts-
Yami No Tenshi: two things, first, i never said that, i just said that i didn't think you would fo it, and secondly, wipe that look off your face. It's unfitting
Guest chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
One word. D'aaaaaaaw...
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YamiYugiandAtem chapter 25 . 9/27/2013
O/O
TexasDreamer01 chapter 25 . 6/26/2013
This wasn't actually that bad, considering your warnings about it in the beginning. - I enjoyed reading it.
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