Reviews for Unexpected
Anon chapter 17 . 5/20
This story was interesting until like the last few chapters. You should've just focused on Clary and Jace. It was weird how everything turned out and just a weird ending.
Author15321 chapter 6 . 1/30
Please say Sebastian doesn't rape or near to rape her. That is so overused and it makes the whole story bad. The real Sebastian Verla isn't actually an asshole.
herongraystairs1234 chapter 17 . 12/19/2016
I LOVE THIS STORY
I am so happy for malec *sniff sniff*(tears of happiness babe)
And clace purlease do NOT even ask how happy i am ...
Its an amazing story and it was truly an happy ending ;);):):)...
#jaia
#clace
#malec
#sizzy
dejah791 chapter 4 . 12/1/2016
love the part when she says take that you man-ho
Guest chapter 17 . 8/29/2016
Loved it ! If only it was m rated and less jaia and malec
Guest chapter 5 . 6/26/2016
LOVIN IT
monkeey76 chapter 17 . 6/2/2016
what is 'slap and scream'?
Gloria chapter 17 . 6/1/2016
This was really well-written, with some genuinely sexy scenes. You definitely have a talent for writing! However, parts of the last three chapters send a HORRIBLE message about how it's fine for a man to hit a woman (regardless of what his past circumstances were), how it's the woman's fault for daring to break up with him and wanting something other than an aimless pothead for a partner, and that she should fix getting beat up by her ex by getting back together with him. This is a popular fic, and tons of teen and preteen girls are reading this. It's certainly not your responsibility (or any writer's) to ensure that girls are able to read about healthy relationships, but I wanted to bring these unfortunate implications to your attention in case it was unintentional on your part. Best of luck with your future writing!
reader-chic-2 chapter 9 . 5/16/2016
This is a good story so far. I like it for the most part. I especially like that because they grew up together they have what I call the 'sibling tone' with each other. I have that with my brothers. However, I really don't like how Clary lets Jace talk down to her. It sounds way too much to the way my brother does to me, so maybe I'm biased, but I do know whenever he does that, there's no way I'm calm and listen to his words. It's not what he said, it how he said it. Jace could have phrased it differently. "I'm sorry you couldn't see that." Or something like that is an example. If have really was trying to understand and make nice with Clary, he probably wouldn't have put blame on her. The way she didn't even react to that attitude makes her seem quite...old school girly. She took on a less femenist role, which is okay, I suppose, but Clary in the books is quite headstrong, independent, and determined. However, nobody said you had to be like that Clary. I really like this whole set up, though. I love that you showed us cute times of them as a kid together! Just something to think about. I really do enjoy reading this!
Guest chapter 17 . 5/11/2016
I LOVED IT SO MUCH x
Guest chapter 14 . 5/11/2016
CLARY AARRRGGHHH
Guest chapter 12 . 5/10/2016
IM CRYING SHVSJUBZADHNCKTHKUEVS x
Guest chapter 3 . 5/9/2016
God i wanna cry jace seeing simon with clary!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/9/2016
OH SHIT
Guest chapter 10 . 5/9/2016
EKKKKKKK this is so adorable x
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