Reviews for Hunted
Spellshadow98 chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
This is...lovely...Not in a romantic sense, but I am in love with your writing, your imagery, and how you get into Luna's head! It was easy, and not at all pushy or unnatural-I felt, to run away and be caught with Luna! I like this a lot, and the ending, I find it to suit Luna perfectly!
Lemon Icee chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Aww this was very sweet! It's rare to see Luna written so well C:
jade chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
wow i love this

poor luna

i really really loved this

great one shot you really captured luna's character!
LuciusBelyakov chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
I love hearing the details of her thoughts, as you envision them, it reminds me of why I love Luna. The way her imagination runs away with her, being worried about offending the murals, its so sweet. And I love that Nargles may be behind it all. You also don’t exaggerate the character, she’s still trying to escape as oppose tow waving and staring at the door while all this happens. Her escape is also entertaining, its quite surreal giant pillows and all.

Its a crying shame that this has been up for almost three months and you haven't gotten a review. Although I can't say that I mind having the pleasure of being the first one. Good job!