|Reviews for Dauntless: Sidestories|
| firelass19 chapter 2 . 7/6
Why, I daresay that Lelouch has twice the potential of Lloyd. Of course as Shirely herself stated, he has yet to apply himself but still. The gall of the Earl...
| firelass19 chapter 1 . 7/5
Well, it's always good to see two members of the Royal Guards being chummy. Even though they are OCs, I really like the way you have developed their characters. I usually don't like OCs but I like these guys XD
| afi123 chapter 7 . 2/13
I really liked these small pov
| Esthelaaaa chapter 7 . 1/25
PLEASE ALLOW THIS HUMBLE INSECT WORSHIP YOU, GALE-SAMA!
I have to hand it to you; you're one of the most impressive writers i have ever met on this website, and i browse through for only the good story since i dont have time for everything, unfortunately...
i read your AN just above, and i know about your computer problems (or at least what you mentioned about them), but i really really REALLY hope you can update Dauntless soon!
And by the way, the "thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed" phrase at the end is nice, but really it should be, "you're welcome for this amazing chapter i know you enjoyed"
haha UPDATE SOON OR I WILL UNLEASH MY INNER YANDERE
i can't wait... i feel worse than lukas in hospital!
| Lord Sanguine chapter 7 . 10/23/2014
The best part of dauntless is the use of perspective do its great to see some extra perspectives here
| kateydidnt chapter 6 . 8/27/2014
I forget, was it ever revealed to the public that those civilians were actually not executed? Or will it be?
| Anon chapter 5 . 3/13/2014
Hello. This is very well written. I love Hector and Lukas' relationship. You made a simple scene very fun and interesting to read. Please update soon. :)
| Anon chapter 5 . 3/10/2014
Thanks for writing. These one shots give me the impression that they are mainly going to focus on Lukas and Hector's relationship (not that I mind; I actually love those two characters). Thank you again and keep up the good work! :)
| 1023 chapter 3 . 3/9/2014
Hello. I really like Lukas as a character and his relationship with Hector. The OCsbare really nice and well-developed. You also write very, very nicely. I like how you can use the same characters but create a really different story. I have re-read Dauntless for twice and I would very much appreciate it if you updated again. Thank you so much.
| AzulTheBlueDragon chapter 7 . 11/25/2013
You should do Gino XDDD He's such a funny character, and I have go to say, its amusing to see him get bullied by Lelouch
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/20/2013
I think I might be in love be in love with Lukas. Thanks for writing!
| Kurama's Foxy Rose chapter 4 . 7/16/2013
"He should have simply grabbed Euphy and ran instead of trying to herd all five of the Ashford students out of the hotel without grabbing attention. He should have killed the terrorists in the elevator before breaking into a hotel suite on a different floor and hiding the Student Council there. It would have been easy enough to have contacted Lelouch from there using the land line."
That second option sounds like it might have worked, if Lukas was able to kill both men before they could shoot.
| weland chapter 6 . 5/20/2013
I'm a little confused. This content was pretty apparent in the main story.
| weland chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
Love the "comprehensively boring". Brilliant combination of modifiers.
| weland chapter 4 . 5/20/2013
You should call out explicitly at the beginning whose POV it is, e.g. in the title.
Correction: "fiend and subordinate" should probably be "friend and subordinate", although the case can be made Lelouch is a fiend and fiends occasionally have subordinates. LOL.