Oh, nice, I wondered if he knew they were only beign fake executed. Anyways, very well done battle.

Wow. Just ... wow. Kind of wish you put this in the original even if it's an OC and it would break the flow. This is utterly amazing. Hector and Lucas really are cut out of the same cloth, huh ... both of them are loyal to a fault and utterly fanatical about proving it. And, of course, just a little bit masochistic :D
Loved this!

I like it! Your sidestories always bring more detail into the situation.
:P Poor Hector. I think he's paranoid. The main reason Lulu chose him was because he was intuitive and had a conscience. The ability to question his prince without losing his trust. And here he is, doubting himself.
Still, I wish Lulu would tell more people about Geass. Then, there'd be less moments like this.
Awesome insight!

-Suz

Nice litle take on Hector's own mind and how he feels of everything. And his own want to prove he is loyal and how he feels bad for doubting Lelouch.

Good take overall.

Really good! I didn't realise Hector knew the executions were fake.

Hmmm. Though I can see why they didn'take the final cut, I am sad that they didn't. They provide an interesting point of view of the jappenings, but they don't particularly progress the storyline. Regardless, I really enjoyed them. The ones with the brothers were heartfelt and the ending line of chapter 3 made me grin like a cheshire cat with the thoughts: For now.

In a way, I really do hope the two princes won't become adversaries, but it seems inevitable.

Until next time

great! I want more of this hehe

I'm not sure if I've reviewed anything you've written yet... If not, I've read every word you've written for Dauntless and Weapons of Mass Destruction. Also, I like these side stories. I'd like to request something, maybe from Kanon's POV? He is a canon character *stifles giggle at bad pun* but I'd like to see something with his thoughts. Maybe Schneizel's visit to the French... President? Or another poker game, like the one Lelouch walked in on? Just a couple ideas. I did see your author's note in WMD, but I don't know if the hold list includes this.

Anyway, keep writing!

Overshadowed Medallion (currently unable to log in)

read all five, but this one is my fav so far. I though there was something strange back then, but now I know why Lelouch hit Lukas... This answer one of the mountain of questions in my life :3

AN, ily? )

now, I'll say that this story will exclusively told from Lukas's POV. Not that I found that annoying...

overall, i like this side stories veru much, it gives me more in-depth about whatever happens in tge side lines. keep up the good work! ;-)

dhyeta

Just read the author note about the upcoming chapter :) great surprise after a day of study. Also in the future if you want me to beta this (including past chapters if you want, although they seem pretty well spelt) ill do it for you.

Nice chapter! I had only been checking the updates on Dauntless and Weapons of Mass Destruction lately so this sidestory was pretty unexpected. Thank you a lot

Lukas is probably my favorite OC character in Dauntless because of his sense of humor that combines with his loyalty. I was specially curious about his thoughts about that scene with Cornelia visiting him. Did he know she took a picture? It was hilarious how he was all "Uh?". I'd definitely look forward to glimpses of Dauntless from him and other OC or side-characters from the main storyline.

Also, though it's not actually creating a whole new website, I would recommend using livejounal. You can either make a personal journal or a community for people to join. It probably easier for your followers to get update notices instead of having to check a particular web once in a while (unless you make a complicated web design with personal e-mail notifications, etc.). I am pretty sure that a lot of people into fanfiction have livejournal accounts so the transition would be easier too (I know I have).

Lukas...! He became my favourite OC in Dauntless a bit after he took up the job of protecting Euphie. The chapter was a nice breather, and his interaction with the nurse was pretty funny.

If you want to make a site, you could try something like a community blog on dreamwidth / livejournal, since communities allow anyone (or just friends / admin) to post, unlike personal blogs. If you actually want to make a website, it gets somewhat complicated with all the coding.

:) You really are a busy bee. But I hope you are getting enough rest as well. Health is more important after all.

Hearing fuller details on the wound was excellent.

And seeing him act like this it makes me think that my assessment of him was correct. He is like Xingke when compared to Lelouch isn't he? Except with the experience difference flipped.

8 years (by that point) for Nunnally which had recently changed to not being able to do it for Nunnally alone vs 6 years for Tianzi which was also difficult due to having a second motivation at the same time.

Suzaku: Due in part to a lifetime spent shelthered and protected, 7 years ago everything changed due to a brief period of time with a B. Prince. His simple world view 'what father says is right is right, and what father says is wrong is wrong', changed due to traumatic experience. Lived a life in hiding for years without any support, then joined the military a year ago (2016) an organization that he hates. Feels he can bring change from within by being an example and that he may possibly find salvation serving Lelouch despite having good reasons as his friend at the same time and a complex desire to help Japan. A all around high physical genius who loves exercise as it helps him not think and find a bit of peace, and hates thinking but has gotten used to it somewhat since 7 years ago. Someone who is naturally good at taking down terrorists people but doesn't like admitting it. Has natural charisma of a leader that is suppressed due to the Trauma of 7 years ago but slightly released due to his birth and previous training (only child so more released Prime Minister training). Is a bit of a sadist but deeply hates it and so shifts the opposite way most of the time. Trained traditionally in p. combat for most of his life but got less training after 7 years ago due to various reasons and a lot of unconventional training recently (thank his corporal and other such people for that). First months of duty being beaten on until joining with Lelouch, at which point he took a lot of damage at sometimes but very little lesser damages. Saved a fully hidden princess from being lonely recently. Was separated from his prince due to becoming a knight recently.

Lukas: Due in part to a lifetime spent in the real world, 5 years ago (his brother after his tour of duty who spent 4 months in training and is 6 years older than him) everything changed due to a brief period of time with his brother. His simple world view 'react to the world as it comes to you' changed due to traumatic experience. Lived with support for his new ways, then joined the military months ago (2017) an organization that he likes. Feels he can bring change from without by defeating all foes and that he may do it without being damned serving Lelouch but more due to having the good reason of being his friend and a simple desire to help his friends. A physical genius with varying skills at a lower level but also some at the highest level who loves exercise to feel his limits and find a bit of excitement, and dislikes thinking but has gotten better at it somewhat since 5 years ago. Someone who is naturally good at protecting people but doesn't feel like it. Has natural charisma of a hero that is expressed due to 5 years ago but is suppressed slightly due to his birth and previous training (has great siblings who make him feel inferior Soldier training). Is a bit of a masochist and doesn't really care (good for being a soldier) and so uses it just fine. Trained in an unconventional manner (brawls) got most of his life but got traditional training since 5 years ago due to various reasons and a lot of traditional training recently (soldier). First months od duty making friends until joining with lelouch, at which point he took moderate damage a few times and got light damage a bit as well. Saved a somewhat hidden princess from being lonely until their fight that was recently. Was not separated from his prince due to not becoming a knight a knight recently.

It's really nice for them to be so similar yet so different.