|Reviews for Untold|
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/3
wow this was such a good story! i actually started reading one more hurt yesterday when i found it on someone's faavorites list, and i loved it so much i just kept reading until the end. by the way that was amazing too, and i actually cried. so few stories do that to me. anyway, i was freaking out over finding an author i liked and since i'm still sick in bed i spend this day reading this story and it was so well written, also. i love finding authors like you. you have a plot and you have deep characters and even with a dark theme it's not just pointless violence or sex.
i love naruto, and i have been a fan of the anime since it came out. i also love the characters and sasunaru is one of my favorite pairings. however, when i look through the stories i become frustrated trying to find good stories. fanfiction, especially this particular fandom, seems to be plagued by stories that have no plot, that have revolting grammar, and those that are so pointless and they seem to have been simply created to troll readers. the worst part is you can't really filter stories based on quality and positive reviews so sometimes i get so frustrated i stop reading this fandom for months and miss out on the few good stories like this. i'm just glad i found this through the favorites.
normally i prefer lighter stories that don't necessarily involve rape and torture, but it really depends on how they're written. i found myself enjoying this and looking forward to more of your work. i think there's still another story to look at. anyway, i'm still sick, so maybe after a nap i'll get on that. gosh, i'm such a fangirl, right? anyway, since i haven't been around for a couple of months, i'll try to look around a bit and see if there's something else worth reading i might have missed.
| addy10 chapter 8 . 12/7/2013
Thank you, thank you so much for writing this story. I've been looking for such story as yours for a very long time. In some cases I stumble on some but mostly I can't find what I really want. You've portrayed everything I have in my fantasies, mostly, and I wouldn't have wanted it the other way. Sasuke, Naruto and Itachi are very realistic, so very realistic that I felt they exist in real life and still exists as this moment. I specifically love how you made Sasuke's character and how you made Naruto's life like that. Everything's just perfect, so damn perfect that I have to save your story and read it over and over again. I can never express how I adore this fic of yours. Thank you for your imagination! 3
| Neko Mixx chapter 8 . 8/14/2013
This was an amazing story. It got me all emotional. It was beautiful, and I'm glad I read it. This should have more reviews!
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/1/2013
ahhh! one of the best sasunaru stories i've ever read! no joke, no exaggeration, in all seriousness! :D I love it!
| mudshake chapter 8 . 5/9/2013
my eyeglasses was broken but i didn't want to not read this. so, even if my eyes hurt, i'm grinning like an idiot when the story had ended..though i would still like you to make even if it's just a 2 or 3 chapter for a sequel..but anyway, thanks for the great job!
| nowsigningin chapter 8 . 4/29/2013
First and foremost, I would like to say that this story is one of the best stories I've ever read! The amount of reviews for this story doesn't do it any justice! Your story deserves way more than that!
Secondly, I think I know why your username is 'reign of tears'. I CRIED SO FUCKING MUCH FOR THIS STORY! To the point that when I woke up the next day (I was reading it the night before), the people in the house were complaining on how loud I was sobbing and that they can't sleep very well. I was just grateful they didn't disurb my sobfest that night. But yeah, point is, I was wailing like a banshee! and crying like there's no tomorrow. Imagine that much tears, REIGN of TEARS.
Lastly, your story. I really really like the way it was written. You actually made your flashbacks really vital to the plot, unlike some authors (who sometimes made me skip the flashbacks, which didn't happen here). It didn't feel like you were dragging the past too long. It felt just right. The plot was also awesome. Your characterization was also great. They may be a bit OOC but I love how you portrayed them. It goes really with the whole plot (which I think is also the very foundation of the story - the characterization, I mean).
Very very wonderful. I love every word of it. I do not regret shedding insane amount of tears for this (though on that note, I am bit worried on reading your other story Hold me Back, I might just don't have enough tears to shed anymore) and for you, it was all worth it. Keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to more of you!
| gummybear1620 chapter 8 . 2/16/2013
I liked this story, I really did :) My favorite parts were the ones in the beginning or middle or sometimes end of every chapter, where there was just a few lines in italics, but they were always really meaningful to the story. Gah, I love those introspective lines.
I really loved the way you mixed the past with the present. I confess to being a little confused in the end xD but still I think I understand most of it. The angst! *flagh* I also admit that the epilogue was overall happy, but the first part of it (with Sasuke killing the butterfly) had me thinking of darker things xD But I'm glad Sasuke truly loved Naruto in the end.
Anyway, great fic. I enjoyed it :D thanks for writing!
| CodenameMise chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Loved the story 3
| Shiroxcat chapter 8 . 1/4/2013
I'm suprised why so great and well written story has so few reviews, it definitely deserves a lot more! It can be seen that you very thought over plot! Even with high expectation for this story ( after reading your great other story - Hold me Back ), I wasn't disappointed. This story maybe delivers others feelings and thoughts than 'Hold me Back',but I was also pleased with it. Haha although when Naruto 'died' it was a bit hard for me, because I still struggled with feelings after HMB, glad it didn't turn out to be like I was afraid of. I really like the way you wrote the story, each chapter gave more informations, but we still are not able to comprehend whole story ( or at least sometimes I thought that I finally understand what exactly happened, but surprise! I was mistaken. I liked this feeling during reading, this element of suprise ). Because of it, I want to read story again, to truly 'catch' all umm hidden hints(?), like the Sasuke's behaviour, when I know that he indeed knows 'everything' about Naruto. As for it, I was so glad that this story didn't turn out to be like many others, where they deal with misunderstanding. I mean this, when Neji blackmailed Naruto to pretend to have affair with him. It was nice surprise that it was quickly 'solved', instead of making it a forced drama. I'm also very happy that you didn't end this story after beach scene, in your author notes, you mentioned that you planned it to do, but it was right decision to write more chapters and expand the plot. For me Naruto's decision to leave was understandable, in the end he will maybe live with Sasuke in Japan, but it wouldn't be a peaceful life for him. I was amazed that you was able to write it naturally, not like cliche drama. Generally story for me was understandable, but the question section was nice to read. ( thanks to it, I got to know the meaning of quote 'You hurt me first' and why Sasuke didn't open letters and who exactly was that guy, who Naruto beat up ) Also I liked that you didn't describe the rape and Naruto's 'dirty' life in details. I didn't want to be this story like others, where author even please himself with writing precise details about it, instead of dealing with this matter to the plot and truly importance in it. You in comparison, for me greatly delivered this like a important part of story, not forced element of it. Only things, which I didn't understand was how Sai knew about how Sasuke dealed with Naruto's absence, if he even didn't work for him and even haven't seen him before? I doubt that Fugaku would mention it to him, but maybe by hearing what he do gave him a hints for thinking that? Plus I'm not sure of Danzo connection to Naruto. I could missed it, but he somehow had a part with this 'accident', when Naruto was thirteen years old, but what exactly relation with it he had? He only knew about it or it was him who created that kind of 'meetings'? If he only knew about it, I don't see a point, why he would look for Naruto later. ( I know that he wanted use Naruto against Fugaku ) I don't quite understand this sentence about him: "We've never actually talked since…Since that time when he just…" After all men died, who took part in rape, didn't they? Oh and in the last chapter I don't quite comprehend what Sasuke means, when he says: ""Resist, Uzumaki…" He heard the other say. Sasuke's warm, heavy breaths smelled of cigarettes. "Or this is rape." shouldn't be 'dont resist'?
Again I love your writing, which gives readers possibility to think about plot and details for it, like hidden meanings and reasons for character's actions, instead simplify story ( I'm not sure if the 'spoon-feed' is the correct word for it? ). I also love Sasuke's character, I have to admit that he is a bit OOC, but it makes the story interesting, and I always had the kink for his obsessive side. It's the first time, when I read story, where it's Itachi, who has resemblance to mother and Sasuke is the colder one of brothers and more 'evil'. Surprisingly it's a bit in his character, because many likes to forget that in manga he indeed had the moments, when others was afraid of just him, I mean his expression, not for what he did or could do. Sasuke indeed can be frightening if he wants. Even if mostly he seemed insane, I still liked to think that I understand him, like his denial for Naruto, when they adopted him. And his growing feelings for him, was nice to read ( too bad that you didn't write more about it, like that story, when Naruto had an accident and Sasuke for the first time said his name ). As for Naruto, I was afraid that he would be too much umm 'rigid', instead of carefree, because he seemed like that at the first, but in later chapters his 'outgoing' side came back ( I especially liked him in the flashback, when he got adopted and was really happy for it ). Thanks for writing this fic, I had good time reading it! Look forward for your next SasuNaru stories - yeah in question section you mentioned that you will focus more on their relationship in your next fanfiction, so I can't wait for it :) It's not like I complain about it in this fic, the amount of romance was enough for me in this story.
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/27/2012
You are one amazing writer. Can't wait for your next story.
| Narutopokefan chapter 8 . 8/6/2012
I liked this story :) ! Had perfect mixture of Drama and Angst ! I'm guessin no sequel ;) ? Keep up the good work bye
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/1/2012
I enjoy the story. Its unique and original. However, I feel like there are many loose ends. And the idea that they're brothers...well...it's kinda incest in a way even though they're not biologically related.
| kyuubiton1114 chapter 4 . 8/1/2012
This was the second Naruto fanfic I ever read, and also the reason that I'm so helplessly addicted to fanfiction now (yeah, that's right, it's your fault!). I loved the not-so-happy-ending, because life is not a fairy tale, and not everything is going to be perfect. Thank you so much for writing this!:)
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| ImaWilburD chapter 8 . 5/17/2012
I like the end great story. Although l might have liked a little at the end about why Sasuke kept sending them back. It was implied he was stubborn and hurting too.