|Reviews for Mahora's Kiiroi Arashi|
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/17
just for reference Asuna doesn't get with Negi in the book/anime and their practically cousins given their origins
| Zeus501 chapter 9 . 11/28/2014
will naruto ever use any jutsu?
| Zeus501 chapter 2 . 11/28/2014
i think that naba chizuru should b with naruto.
he needs some1 motherly like her in his life...also...i cant see her being with negi
| uscias chapter 12 . 11/23/2014
Please update soon.
| sky00 chapter 12 . 6/2/2014
please continue this fic i really want to see the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/25/2014
If Konoka isn't paired with someone who is with Setsuna that is pure idiocy.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/2/2014
| JRecon chapter 12 . 12/17/2013
this was really fun to read good job
| Majin-kun chapter 2 . 12/7/2013
Negima always tends to have the largest harem...only real issue I have is that they're pretty young; so I tend to dislike lemons in these. I think it would be better if they keep it fluffy and just imply it. You could argue that there's girls like Chizuru...but c'mon...she probably drinks milk since her first week as a baby.
Glad someone pointed out that the Scar should be both in the front and the back...Chidori/Raikiri easily pierces the whole body.
| Majin-kun chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Damn it...I thought they would at least seriously consider the whole Marriage with Chao...
| Sweet Kagamine Kiss chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Hm... interesting... :O
| Biblio388 chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Interesting and entertaining opening. I look forward to reading more.
| CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Are you going to continue it has been over a year?
| silverfoxkurama chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
i like can't wait for more and they should totally be paired with naruto Setsuna, Kaede, Mana
| Reclusive Dork chapter 9 . 2/24/2013
Oh, and Luo Dao is rather powerful(but not overly powerful, no matter how much stuff I give him, he's twenty-four years old, and he only found out about magic at age 17), as the seventeenth reincarnation of the Demon Wolf Fenrir. He CAN turn into a giant wolf, but that takes a lot of magic power-and he tends to lose control. he can also summon Demon Blood Wolves, and Autumn Wolf Spirits, depending on which type of magic he uses at the time.
Oh, and when I said he wears a red tux, he actually wears a bright crimson tuxedo Jacket and black tuxedo pants, and a black undershirt.
I also have a few swords for you to choose from for anyone.
Sakkayui(Writer's Edge)-a sword that has a vein of magical ink running through it, and a well of said ink in the handle.
Kebab-a giant sharpened toothpick(with a handle) that is so saturated with magic power, it's cutting power is enough to split the sky with a very weak swing. but if you don't know how to use it,and your chakra doesn't match with it, you'll hurt yourself... badly. it's also made from a wood that is impervious to flame. This one was not made by man, but by a very bored deity.
Ranbunkizu(Papercut)-Giant scissors that separate into two large swords. They're really good against plant magic, and they allow the user to access said magic as well. cool, right?
Unagiyougan(Magma Eel)-Based on the Snake swords from Soulcalibur, this weapon can lash out as a bladed whip, only with a twist. this one has the ability to cloak itself in volcanic flames, and/or liquify into motlen metal(very hot). You can fuse with it to gain invincibility to heat.
Ankoku Ikkaku-A Massive black Scimitar with gray narwhals on each side. can control all elements of darkness-shadows, fear, madness and anger- but the wielder doesn't automatically get all powers.
Crux-a large Greatsword in the shape of a cross. Uses spiritual magic to attack the soul AND the body.
Bao Lung- a sentient Jian with a white blade, sanguine edge, and a redwood hilt shaped like a blood-splatter like wing that gorges itself with blood to increase cutting power, and can use absorbed blood as a swordbeam attack. this is most likely to be used by Luo Dao
Mar Long- a large rapier shaped like a Marlin's nose with a marlin's sail connected to the lower part of the blade as well as the hand guard(connected to, not being the hand guard), that can cut through magic energy with the blade or reflect it with the sail.