Reviews for Shooting Star
OnGuard chapter 6 . 5/26/2014
I think your writing a soap opera. A very boring soap opera.
LolaTheSa chapter 6 . 7/11/2013
i give up on this hinata is too OOC...

firstly How dare she use his nindo... SHE HAS ALREADY BROKE!

second HER actions are forced...

THIRDLY i can tell so far you're immature... naruto avoids her because he thinks he can't protect? BROKE his nindo RIGHT there! everyone scorns naruto because hinata's aching & Left on her own accord! hinata is OOC & her actions are so fucking forced... leaving because naruto avoided her? The way you're going is like her love was simply crush... SmH dropped!
LolaTheSa chapter 5 . 7/11/2013
so what he doesn't deserve tears? do you not know who the fuck naruto is? hero of the leaf... hero of the war.. future hokage...

RIGHT now hinata's actions are forced...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Instead of acid, wouldn't that be Kurama's chakra that was surrounding Naruto at the beginning(or something like that)?
N.U chapter 20 . 4/27/2013
I HATE YOU!
Guest chapter 16 . 4/27/2013
Don't care about your life.
datgirl chapter 31 . 12/24/2012
it was ok
Narami chapter 11 . 12/10/2011
Hi

Nice story so far even if Hinata is super OOC and the story is a bit rushed sometimes :P

Btw Watashi wa Hokage ni hanashimashou does not mean Let me speak to the Hokage. That would be: Watashi wo hokage ni hanasete kudasai.
USAVet chapter 31 . 11/27/2011
Prologue comes at the beginning. You wanted epilogue
DarqFox chapter 29 . 11/20/2011
This. Is the best story I've ever wasted 27 hours of my life on. FUCKIN' AWESOME!

A few grammar mistakes here and there, but other than that, nothing to complain about. However, Tobi is not Madara. Tobi is Obito. Proof: Obito gave up his left eye as he died for Kakashi. Kabuto brought him back, and Tobi's mask has ONE EYE ON THE RIGHT SIDE (the side of his one remaining eye.) Besides, Madara died hundreds of years before, after he founded the Uchiha Clan.

That's the only thing that I saw completely off, but that's just me.

Oh, if you have the time, check out my new story, 'Shadows of the Future.' My adoring fans don't review my story enough.

I give your story a 5.43/6 stars. Good job. Just work on your grammar.

High School sucks. But do it well, or it'll screw you over for college.
Doolster chapter 29 . 11/19/2011
Awesome Chapter! Please Continue!
SoMa-NaruHina chapter 29 . 11/16/2011
Wow, I can't wait to see what'll happen, more awesomeness I predict
SoMa-NaruHina chapter 28 . 11/5/2011
WRITE MORE PLEASE!
watson85 chapter 26 . 10/15/2011
hey i am really haping that you will get the chance to update the story soon. I am really enjoying it and can't waite to see were it goes from here.

i read trough all 26 chapters withing a day and am really hooked to say the least please keep up the good work
NaruHina0163 chapter 24 . 9/13/2011
nice chapter, can't wait to see what hinata does. just wondering, whats with the speech marks?
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